| "Beyond the Well" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 15:15 CST
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i have one question for you i like this story and all but how could you do that to poor kagome its so sad. but still i like the story you have begun. and i'm glad you did but its so sad
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 15:15 CST
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i have one question for you i like this story and all but how could you do that to poor kagome its so sad. but still i like the story you have begun. and i'm glad you did but its so sad
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 13:34 CST
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AWSOME CHANGES. I THINK THEY MAKE THE STORY SO MUCH BETTER. WELL I SINCE I KNOW IT'LL BE WHILE ALL I CAN SAY IS I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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Reviewed By: kareema On: November 07, 2005 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Very, very interesting. I like the storyline so far, and this is a different take than anything I've personally read in the Inuyasha fan-fic universe. What I find very interesting are the changes you've made to your story. If nothing else, it shows the writing process in action, and how a plot can to off on tangents of its own ever so easily.
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Reviewed By: yeah shorty On: November 06, 2005 06:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more im in suspense wanting to know how inuyasha took kagome and forcered her to stay
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Title: re:great!
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOPS *typo:sesshomaru*well your story is great so far!!
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE INUYASHA! >o< *at least in this story ^.^* *cries* poor Seeshomaru,rin,jaken,shippo,and sango....POOR EVERYBODY!! *sob*
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 12:37 CDT
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THIS STORY SO FAR IS AWSOME. I HOPE THAT THE CHAPTERS THAT FOLLOW DO IT JUSTICE. GOOD LUCK
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Reviewed By: kagsess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hmmm, this is getting better and better, please update soon.
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Title: Beyond The Well
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 14:25 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: duranrox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont really like inuyasha being a bad guy but i know you have a plan and story in your head. hopefully he will turn out for the better. whether he does or not, oh well! this will still be a great story! update ASAP!!!!!
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Title: Beyond The Well
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 13:59 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: nice story
Reviewed By: zachtheax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really dont like the idea of inuyasha being a bad guy but it sounds like a really good story (actually him being bad bothers me less than naraku being good, how bout u say they r both evil lol)
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:39 CDT
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Good work! I hope to see it updated soon!
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Title: NICE!
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I added this to my faves! I love the start to this story. It is very well written. Keep up the good work and update soon! I'm dying to know what's going to happen next to Sota! Dark, but has me drawn to it. Please continue!
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