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Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: artemis the hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, do love the story line there. I have a similarone, but don't worry I didn't copy yours. lol. It's really good keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 23:15 CST
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Aw this chap was very cute and funny...and you know I sort of do feel bad for Sachiko (spelling?) its not like she IS Kikyo, and the poor girl is SORT OF getting cheat on, just sort of to not really...lol...but hey, I like it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: 7caligurl On: November 10, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 22:16 CST
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The storyline is good, there's always something happening in each chapter. Don't you hate it when th story is just dragged on...ugh, what a pain! Keep up the great work!
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Title: oh my!
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
talk about a cruel turn of fate. Oh me, oh my! what is Kagome to do? lol! Do update the story as soon as possible. It's coming along very nicely! Great job. C-ya! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 17:08 CST
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Oh, now that I was not expecting. But having her working in Inu's family's place does add possibility for some funny stuff. Sorry no reviews for a while, kinda blost the laptop's power cord... But I found it again, and all is well again! I cant wait for the next update!Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: eIvin On: November 06, 2005 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good story so far and quite unique but i do have a few questions. first are we going to learn how inuyasha died? since he is a half demon doesnt that mean that he should have still been alive unless some1 had killed him. also are we going to learn what happened after inuyasha left kagome, what happaned to kikyo etc. anyway gj although i cant say i particulary like kagome so far kinda seems brattish pushing inuyasha away and then getting mad at him for doing things that arnt really his fault etc
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 12:36 CST
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You know the little saying "Its a small world...and getting smaller" truely applies to poor Kagome at this moment. To think that Kin's mom is her boss...lol...but its all good. And I'm glad how Sango (forgot her new name) came over like that...wonder what they are going to talk about? Well as always can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: x_paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story! I thought this would be another au fic where kagome is in college and meets inu, but sooo not! XD It's totally awesome.
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Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 10:35 CST
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...and you say you're not cruel? okay, I guess it's not cruel persay, but definitely frustrating. but, I think Sango/Nozomi? is going to remember first, cause she already feels their past friendship. Or maybe I'm wrong, but it sure is fun to guess!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 15:04 CST
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NO! Why did Inuaysha AKA Kin have to go and do a thing like that? *sniffle* and now Kag is taking Hojo's offer..noooo.....oh well...can't wait for more. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 16:08 CDT
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lol no it was good and catchy...great chapter, I can't wait for Inuyasha to remember Kagome...well if he can of course.
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Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 16:07 CDT
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You, are very cruel. Everytime I finish a chapter I think, "wha? where's the rest???" and then nearly cry when I realize that there is no more. but, despite the evil cruelty of the evil author, I shall love this story until I stop loving it. (which, from the way things are going, won't be very soon)
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 15:10 CDT
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Well, you got my attention. Good story, well written. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 22:02 CDT
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He swallowed an entire pack of gum solid? Ouch. I choke on Advil sometimes....damn. I think Kin/Inuyasha is already jealous of Kagome. Good sign.
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