| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: pIpsquEAk On: November 22, 2006 08:36 PST
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I don't know if you noticed that someone had wrote a complaint about reviews, it got me thinking that perhaps you also disliked people not reviewing. I truly enjoy your story but I can't seem to find the right words as I am not a very outspoken person so have never reviewed before. Your plot, creativity and characters are great and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 20:14 PST
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I lovedc it update soon!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:50 PST
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oh, my, god. have i told you that i love you way with words? the beginning was so intense, a regular shopping experience catipulted to a life and death stuggle where mama higurashi doesn't know if she lost her brother and her son to the nexus. the mental images of the moon rising so close in the sky, like it was fighting for space the the earth... and then demon inuyasha and kagome. he is so dominant but so childlike in a way. they both stuggle to understand each other fully. it seems as though the bonds they share may be an different variation on the bond midoriko and kagome's father want the group to have to form the living jewel. will midoriko be made aware of this bond? and the way you used almose innocent sensory movements to increase the passion between the two...wow. i loved the cliff hanger. did the choas in the modern world happen because of the shards in the Goshinboku (which i'm guessing would be anchored no matter what since it is a tree of ages) or did the shards stop the chaos. i cant' wait till the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:04 PST
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Wow, hot lemon content AND nail bitting cliff hangers in one chapter. The wait between chapters is getting harder and harder.
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Title: Teach the Girl Latin!
Reviewed By: butteryasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 10:44 PST
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"Inuyasha, I'm human. I don't understand your language!" - well, obiviously, she needs to learn Inu-ish (or the closest thing she can take in her school, which would be latin)... very well done. I like how his smile is not human. Gave excellent imagery... and nice hot lemon to boot!
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Title: Alsome
Reviewed By: Vegetas4Life06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 14:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please i beg of you update. this is a alsome story, ilove the plot and how you wrote it. if you do not update i will go into depresion.
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:25 PST
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Oh I'm so happy that Miroku and Sango have their relationship back on track. I was getting a little worried about Sango there for a minute. Excellent chapter. I'm still dying to know what Kagome and InuYasha are up to for the full moon. And what about Sess and Kirara? Kirara may have been taking over the story a bit but I'd still love to know where she ran off to. As always I can't wait for more. Hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: neobaby08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 16:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG i love this story i must say u are one of the most magnificent writers i have seen or noticed or w/e ne ways i rlly wanna kno wat happens so update soon i rlly enjoy reading ur story thnx for writing it
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Reviewed By: SusyLynn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 15:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb chapter as always! But! Was really looking forward to finding out about Inu and Kag! XD (But this chapter is still GREAT!) Thank you for taking the time to write. I don't think I could ever run out of ways to complement your work! :D :D
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: Awesome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, and equally great lemon...now, I wonder what Demon Inu and Kagome are up too...hmmm... :P
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 14:39 PDT
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I really liked the wedding; eloping just seems more in character for Sango and Miroku. At least different.
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: October 27, 2006 00:05 PDT
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Ouch, lol! Miroku abducted-eded Sango-chan, lol!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 15:39 PDT
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loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 08:53 PDT
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That was a great chapter!! Miroku and Sango married now!! So sweet. I love this story so much. It is so worth the wait for each chapter that comes out!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 06:32 PDT
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now i fully believe that miroku represents wisdom. he thought things out and approached sango in a way that was still very much him, but not sexually explict. and she finally managed to voice what she was so afraid of. i have to wonder though why she was so concerned about inuyasha knowing that she and miroku had sex, when he and kagome are mated in demon eyes but not married in human. inuyasha would never judge her like that. and i loved how miroku came to the conclusion that it is the hanyou that is the most courageous because he fears letting either side of himself have total control. it would be like losing a part of what makes him, him. as much as i was hoping to see demon inuyasha again, i really enjoyed the sango/miroku bonding. things need to be out in the open for them to ever hope to achieve the power of the living jewel and perhaps now that miroku's mind is more settled he will have more success with kagome and the mind link. i do have one question though. did kagome and inuyasha actually complete a mind link and midoriko doesn't realize it or is it more of a product of their mating and their powers acceptance of each other. beautiful chapter!
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