| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 19:49 PDT
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I like the details when they are all jammed in the bottom of the well.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 19:26 PDT
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I have read this before! A month or two ago. Don't know why I didn't add it to my favorites and I don't know what the last chapter I read was but that's OK 'cause it's keeping me interested rereading it.! Ouatic-7
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 08:29 PDT
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LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 09:40 PDT
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DEAR AUTHOR ... I HAVE READ YOUR STORY AND....IT ROCKS!!!!!!!!! I indeed think you could take on sueric... she is an amazing writer and so are you.You both have your own opinions on how Inuyasha acts and stuff. i love this story so much!!!!!! It is amazing... the whole time thing is really awsome.. i wish i had an imagination like that but i'm clueless.So i hope you continue this story because i love it!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Facets of the Living Jewel
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 09:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The origionality of this story is fantastic, going indepth into the characters as all InuYasha lovers have always wanted. New characters are developed well and not just incidental. The enjoyment in reading this is a "can't stop reading" type of enjoyment. The author is highly educated in many things it appears when you read this story, as you learn new things as you go along. It is nice to see the true use of karate terminology and the reasons behind them. The author needs to be congratulated for her first fanfiction, it is excellent!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 08:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, dont thank me...all thanks go to you for making 'Facets' in the first place. I have been enjoying this story from the start, so I thank you again for writing it. Am glad things are better for you now as well. A for the chapter: it was great. I still love how Kirara speaks her mind. As for Kohaku, makes one wonder if he did distract InuYasha or not. Cause Kanna is never up to any good. It was like she needed the blood for something, but what. Awesome chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 15, 2006 16:43 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Sess's interaction and sparring with Kirara is hillarious. I almost spit coke on the keyboard when she started kneeding his thigh. Only a cat. This story has so much going for it, the least of which is the bonding within the group. I can't say enough good about it! Thanks so much for writing for us! Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 15, 2006 16:17 PDT
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Kirara is hillarious in this chapter. I don't know if I like her or the three faces of Inu better. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 04:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been so long since i've reviewed. I really enjoy this fic so much. I do love it, n sorry for not expressing it in the reviews, but now i'm doing it. This fic is so amazing!!!That Kirara is something! It almost seems as if she n sesshomaru might get together. My head still hurt when i'm trying to figure out the conection with Kanna and when that other soul thingy went in sango's body, n why she needed sango's blood. Not gonna tell me huh? Oh well no problemo, I'll jus wait for these wonderful updations like allways. I really love it!!! Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: May 14, 2006 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm glad u updated I was begining to think you were dead. I'm glad that whatever was making you sad is better now though. *sigh* I agree with Kirara Sess is being an idiot. And I really feel like hitting Yourei now....he was such an asshole!!!! I understand what he was trying to teach them but he was still an ass. I really wish Inu had bit him. But I am very proud of Inu for not flinching when Yourei pressed that sword to his throat. Well update soon ok and I'm trying to be patient but I just really would love to see Inu kick Sess's ass. ^.^
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 14, 2006 12:31 PDT
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i just had to review even though i'm not signed on. i absolutely adore how you portay kirara! as the proud mama of a very tempermental and territorial kitty i always smile when she gives it to the dogs. and inuyahsa is showing a wonderful new found maturity. i think it was always there below the surface but never brought out. he did always wrry about his demon hurting people and exacting revenge but sometimes i think humans hold grudges much worse. the demon only seeks to eliminate the threat, the human side seems to want to cause pain and misery, bent on revenge. and sessy...ahhh smelling like a neko. i'm lokking forwardto your next installment. i'm curious as to why kagome and miroku are having such trouble with the mind meld. but does she and inuyasha know they have one? and does his demon still want the full moon with "him" being out so much more often? wonderful work! (if you feel the need to respond, i'm an author so my email is in my profile)
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 01:04 PDT
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Your story has won Second Place for Best Best "In-Character" Fiction (for your characterization of InuYasha) from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_In_Characte r_Fiction_2.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 00:19 PDT
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Your story has won Second Place for Best AU/AR Fiction from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_AU_AR_Ficti on_2nd.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Title: OMG! ^^
Reviewed By: inuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 16:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!! this is the best story i have ever read!! plez keep it coming! @-@
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 09:54 PDT
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Wow, you've really done your research and it shows. Ch. 50 is one of most enjoyable things I've read in a while. I loved the interaction between Sess and Kirara. Is that a little bit of sexual chemistry I'm detecting? Poor Sess, if there is he is doomed. Kirara would definately be someone who could keep him in his place. The lick was just perfect. I have a part siamese who is very vocal and I'm sure that her language is not nice at all. I'll be sure to take notes and learn what Neko I can. The idea of a cross over with the Dr. Who universe and Inuyasha is a good one. What with the well I'm surprised I haven'ts seen it before. I was really expecting Kagome to regenerate when she died instead of just reviving. What happened? It can't be because she is half human since the Doctor is too. Good luck in the first quarter voting at IYFG.
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