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| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I'm glad that you didn't delete it.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 18:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh hey, Im not bugged by all the revisions, not at all, heh, I just didnt understand why they were being done is all. Hey, Im no expert on writing but I do know what I like and I think your story is fantastic. So whenever you update or revise a chapter, I read. Thanx much for a great story.
| Reviewed By: spienta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 12:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am totally addicted to this! You have great writing talents. I am a huge Inu fan and I don't think there is much OOC at all, they are all older in this fic, and I can see them all behaving the way you portray them. I can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: December 29, 2005 00:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this!!!! ^.^ And that mating call thing is damn sexy!!! I loved the first time he did it when he was behind her and was nibbling her shoulder. Reminds me of my exboyfriend, *sigh* too bad reall guys can't growl. Anyway I'm so pleased to find another author who knows about Dragon Scale Tetsusaiga and everything. I'm so sick of having to explain everything to my friends because America is fucking slow. While I read the manga online so I'm all informed so they all look to me for answers. Anyway you are doing an amazing job, the only thing that bothers me is that you use the terrible viz translation and say Kilala instead of the correct Kirara. Anyway update soon ok ja!!!! ^.~
| Title: Hope u had a great Holiday
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 00:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I see you revised, Im still not understanding why this is always done, but,oh well. Still love the story, and has re-read it a few times now. Great story BTW. Cant wait till the next update. Hope your Christmas was good. Have a Happy New Year, too!
| Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 21:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, update soon
| Reviewed By: Inaqui On: December 25, 2005 05:42 PST
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Yo. Haha, fair warning? email is aenia_inaqui@yahoo.com.au *hands over another box of pocky* Haha, damn you have discovered my evil scheme, to make you fat! :p Or at least your virtual pocky eating self... Actually, the call that was confusing me was the Pack Call... was confusing it with the Pack Cry, because when InuYasha "thrummed" it (Sorry, I have odd visuals accompanying that word... don't ask...) I was confuzzled, after Sesshoumaru threatened dire consqequences should the half-breed dare challenge his leadership by using the Pack Cry. I dunno, I think it was the similar names that got me... Cos I was having a "whatchoo talkin'bout, Willis" moment there. :p As for the tono, I know you haven't described it yet, but just the fact that you CALLED it a tono and not a fortress, or palace, or luxury villa etc. You're...you're not going to give him *chokes* indoor plumbing are you? *sweat drops* The sword fight...I dunno... I understand your aversion to extra wordiness. Perhaps if in the beginning of the fight you shoved in a clarifier regarding the kata forms? Then it might be less confusing, and readers will have a reference point not the A/N. I dunno... you asked! Tensaiga vs Tenseiga...don't we all use Chris Rijk's stuff though? haha. I was gonna bring up Tetsusaiga's spelling but hey, you did it for me, haha. As to the latest chapter, I can't concrit lemons. But whoa, double feedback, eh? haha... Merry Whatever Holiday you follow!
| Reviewed By: Shobs On: December 23, 2005 09:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this version could have been placed on FF.net without fear of it being removed, but I suppose you might be pushing the 'R'/'M' rating a bit far... Anyway, wow! It's nice to be able to type a review without the keyboard sticking. I was using a monitered library computer so I couldn't exactly say what I wanted to, nor go look at this version. I'll get to the reviewing now. I liked your play of words for the lemon. ^_^ Oh, don't I sound rather perverse saying that? *shrugs* Anyway, I suppose my rating really covered what I thought of it. All I can say is the I really enjoyed reading the chapter (it was even better the second time around!), and I love the story. Thanks for sharing!
| Reviewed By: Ardent-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 05:44 PST
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Blah! Make me come all the way over here *grumble* Oh well I didn't expect it to be trashy, not based on your other chapters, and it was, well, really classy. I especially thought it cool how you used the mind meld in this scene, very effective! Can't wait for an update! Happy Holidays, and have a happy new year! ~Sami
| Reviewed By: oopy922-not logged in On: December 22, 2005 18:44 PST
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i love this update! it was fabulous!
| Reviewed By: Inaqui On: December 20, 2005 07:44 PST
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Oh yeah, and isn't it Hakkaku, not Hakkau, and TensEiga? Just being picky... cant help it.... Here's extra pocky to compensate. *avalanche of colourful cardboard boxes*
| Reviewed By: Inaqui On: December 19, 2005 06:27 PST
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Hey! Argle, cliffy you evil person. Nice chapter. I loved the bit confusion between blood and... other things, ahem. One question, though. If Sesshoumaru demanded that InuYasha not use the Pack Call because that bespeaks challenge, and he says he will teach InuYasha other means to call his pack.... then why does InuYasha thrum the Pack call in that chapter? Because then, wouldn't he be challenging all over again? I know that Sesshoumaru has accepted and truced and all that jazz..... but.... still....... *is confused* Is it ok because it was quiet? If so, then why does Sesshoumaru need to teach InuYasha other ways to call his pack? BTW, if you want me to stop asking these things, just say "Shut up, Inaqui!" and I dutifully will :p Other than that, good. Yeah, whilst reading the fight scene I was bloody confused, but the explanation at the end cleared that up, even if it is still confusing to read. TTFN! *hands box of Men's Pocky* (yes there is such a thing... haha)
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!
| Reviewed By: jade_pendant(nsi) On: December 13, 2005 08:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHH how cruel u left me as a cliffy!!!! *goes on knees* PLEASE update soon, i need this story! onigai, arigato
| Reviewed By: Inaqui On: December 12, 2005 18:01 PST
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*grins* Weeeeeeelll..... I suppooooose you can have pocky..... since you've been so updatery.... Or Ghana, fantastic chocolate from Japan. It's brilliant stuff!!!! :p I liked this chapter, especially the line "You! The human hater! You love her!" that made me smile. Yourei Taisei confuses me a squidge. Just what is his agenda? Of course, I probably need to reread it in bulk because the storyline is getting mumbled in my head with all the other fics I've read lately... bah to that. I'llread it again and THEN concrit that chapter. I reread the chapter with the Kai wolves, and I much prefer it. Just one bit, when InuYasha notes that a particular bitch is trouble, before they're named, it doesn't carry through and I couldn't figure out without deduction which bitch it was (Jinx?? Maybe?) About chapter 31, I must express great joy that you haven't given Sesshoumaru a very unJapanese fortress with curtains and carpets and flushing toilets. One thing, the bit when he transforms into his big dog form was so short and abrupt that I nearly missed it! Rin is so adorable I want to glomp her. I liked the choice of Borzois...appropriate. The fight scene was good. The train of Sesshoumaru's thoughts was effective foreshadowing and Yourei Taisei's intervention was, for lack of a word, timely. "I should bite her" hahaha. I laughed. Just one type that I could see, in one of the youkai Inuyasha's thoughts, you have wanther as opposed to want her. Ok, all done!! Looking forward to next chapter
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