| "My Life In High School." Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: FAZZ On: December 22, 2006 07:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic i`m realy into it hopefully you get the next update in soon. LaTeRzZ
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 00:07 CST
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you might want to re-read and check for spelling and grammar, inu better not be dead for good!!
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Reviewed By: lalama On: November 11, 2006 09:02 CST
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hey bring more
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Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 20:02 CDT
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I enjoyed the story a lot despite the huge amount of spelling and grammar errors. I really do enjoy the way that the story is progressing. I hope that you decide to update soon.
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Title: love ur story!!!!
Reviewed By: beautiful_nightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 16:12 CDT
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i love ur story. pls pls pls update the first chance you get. i admire ur creativity and feeling you put into it. cant wait until you update. ~beautiful nightmare
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an AWESOME story. u really need to re-read b4 u post it cause u have a lot of grammer errors. for example u put how instead of who and its hard 2 figure out wat u mean. it might b a good idea 2 get and editor or beta writer. but other then that it was really good. plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:20 CST
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I am in the middle of reading chapter 6 I believe. I like most of the story is has fallen flat here. Hoping it will pick up. You really should ask someone to beta for you.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: inutaisess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i like the story. Just a few things piss off is your spellin' and grammer. I hate thinkin' what your tryin' to say. But, other can that keep updatin' plz
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Reviewed By: Peay On: November 08, 2005 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to watch your spelling and grammar. You have a very basic plot line and need to go more indepth on what it happening. You get repetitive in your writting and sentances. focus on only one topic at a time when writting, not 2 or 3. When discussing Inu-Yasha and Kagome dont jump to Sango and Miroku with out a smooth transition. Becareful on your sentence structure, and make sure to reread for sense. Other than that the story is quiet good. Just look at those few things and think about getting a beta writer to double check your writing. Cat =^.^= If you need to get in contact with me e-mail me at SMSKitten@excite.com or SummaPrincess45@aol.com to IM me SummaPrincess45
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: November 03, 2005 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope who ever is sick or something is OK!Please update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: October 24, 2005 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:10 CDT
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This is a great story please update!
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Title: Anime Lady PIMP
Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 17:56 CDT
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Please update!
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