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Reviewed By: chriswiz1 On: February 11, 2007 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! What a story! Now the only problem is waiting for the next chapter. I can see the trends for the basic story line but I have no idea if you are going to throw kinks into the works or just how you will write the events happening. That is the entertainer's job, mine is to let you know that I appreciate your literary efforts and patiently (HA!) await further updates of your delightful saga. Thank you for sharing.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kallipso [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 17:19 CST
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Whimpers in a corner. I have been waiting for this to update for forever. I love the new chapter keep it coming.
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Title: Mistress
Reviewed By: Cataclysmic On: October 18, 2006 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant storyline I absolutely loved it, original but well gelled crossover. can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: September 19, 2006 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter and hope to read more. Poor Richard and Harry didn't even leave a note.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage() On: August 15, 2006 12:29 CDT
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I LOVE IT!!! *grins* I'm soooooo glad that you updated! I've reread this story twice! ^^
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 17:02 CDT
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I am kind of surprised that you don't have more reviews. This is a good fic. I know I have reviewed for this fic before, but I wanted to re-read it after I have gotten myself into the Anita Blake series. I am obviously not as far along as you are. I am just getting donw with The Killing Dance. I do have alot of the necissary information however, and I do not have to guess on quite as much as I did the first time. I am sad that Edward isn't in this fic yet. He is so far my favorite character. Don't ask me why, he just have some strange quirks about him. Eating steak while watching a movie about a woman being eaten by a werewolf and werepanther. Lol. I have to say that re-reading this has given me some of my own ideas for a HP AB crossover/fusion. Mine seems to be a little happier than yours (Atleast how it goes in my head) but with alot more sex. Mhmm... I just wanted to review again so maybe it would tempt you to writing another chapter. I love this fic, and I await for you to continue! Ja!
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: May 14, 2006 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic I've reread it about three times now and I'm dieing waiting for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. Mist
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 08:27 CDT
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Mhmm...Sorry to say this, but ABOUT BLOODY TIME! Nothing on you, and I feel that Harry does deserve some peace and quiet, and love..(-Eyes Jason-) But it isn't a HP fic if it doesn't have Ugly and his goons in it. I think it will be more interesting now, since Harry is now snake lord. And as I remember, snakes were somethig that Hary had a lot of problems with. HOWEVER! I also see a down side to this whole 'Snake Lord' and stuff. It makes me think that Harry is becomming more like Voldemort. Not in the 'Evil Killing All Muggles' type, but as in 'I Love Snakes So Much I Want To Look Like Them' type. That might just be me. I am considered crazy by some.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage() On: April 12, 2006 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wicked. *grins* Absolutely wicked. I just LOVE this fic! I really wish there were more AB/HP fics floating around... One with a Harry/Damnien/Nathaniel pairing maybe.... *griiiiin* heheh. anyway, PLEASE UDPATE SOON!! ^^
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Reviewed By: DarkenedProngs On: March 28, 2006 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love what you've done with this fic so far! Are there any Weasleys who haven't betrayed Harry? And will we find out if there is anyone else in England loyal to him? And will Remus and Draco get to meet the St. Louis gang? You know what would be really cool? If Harry was given a pensieve with some stuff from the Marauders in it and watched it with Richard. I think it'd be neat to see Richard's reaction. Especially if his mother had been visiting and decided to take part in the mischief! Oh please give us more Jason/Harry kisses! Please!
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Title: fabulous story!
Reviewed By: Aria-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything about this fic!! And i cant believe its only got 12 reviews!! its a shame!! its such a great story! and VERY original!! I love the pairings! Thank you soooo much for writing it and please update soon! I cant wait to read whats gonna happen next!! xxxx Aria
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 14:22 CST
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Ye gods does Harry have a bad life. I have not read the Anita Blake series, but after reading your story and a few of others, I am really hopping that I will have a chance to read them. I like the JasonxHarry pairing that you're introducing. I think it will be good for Harry and his trust issue that he has going on. I was dissapointed when you skipped a whole mess of the school year and went right to christmas. When you did that, I was given no information on how he was doing in his classes or anything. I know that some writers do that, but I really don't like it. I am really curious about Draco and Remus aswell. In the last chapter, you let us see in their point of view, but other then that, there was hardly anything on them. I do really like your story, however, and I hope that you will not forget about this story and continue writing it. Keep up the good work! Ja!
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Reviewed By: insanechildfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 10:47 CST
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this is great. i love it
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Heath13 On: January 31, 2006 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best crossover yet. It puts a spin on things that I've never seen/known. Keep up the good work, you'll be a pro in no time.
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Reviewed By: DarkenedProngs On: January 05, 2006 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the style in hich you write. It's easy for me to follow and your original characters kinda remind me of the Scoobies. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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