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Reviewed By: kailyssia On: February 27, 2008 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an update. I have been following this fic since it was on AFF.net so thank you for letting everyone know to come here for updates. I love this fic, it is one of my favorite fics of all time. I kinda wish this was a real Anita Blake book its so good. This is truely the best crossover I have ever read. Your OCs are wonderfully written and their scenes are so much fun to read. I love the Harry/Jason pairing and I like that you waited to get them together until Harry was a little older. I also really like the way you write Richards charater, in the books he is so bitchy, but the way you write him makes him an interesting and important charater so thanks. My favorite thing about your fic is by far Kek and the serpant lord idea. Kek is a great charater and the serpant lord idea is so very interesting and believeable for the material. I do have one problem though, the last three chapters don't seem to be up to your usual standards. They seem rushed. Not only in length , but also in content. The final battle especially seemed the most rushed as well as the prep for the battle, so like I said the last 3 chapters. I also have a question about the OotP you have a short bit about a meeting in which they want to gain control of Harry again and Bill is a spy, what happened with that? After that nothing else was mentioned, so did they try something or didn't they? I have read the next Anita Blake book and it is much better and Danse Macabre. I agree with you about Danse Macabre, it just dragged on and on had a lot of sex(which isn't bad when there is a story to go with it) Anita bitching almost the entire book and for the life of me I cannot remember what the plot was. I was telling a friend about the series and giving a summary about each book and when I got to DM I couldn't remember who or what the bad guy was or the problem in general, it was sad. But The Harlequin is fast paced with an interesting plot. Anita doesn't spend the entire book whining and overall I liked it. Its more like the earlier books in the series so I hope the future books will follow suit. BTW the next book in the series is called Blood Noir and will be out June 3, 2008. Can't wait for the next update. And please don't rush the ending. We don't care if it takes you a fewchapters to end the story, we don't care if you have to write a sequel(wink, please) it would be a crime to all of your hard work to rush the ending. Your fic deserves better and so do your fans.Overall I love this story and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. BTW I wasn't kidding about the sequal idea, you really should write one.
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Reviewed By: Youko's Dish [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 01:09 CST
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oh boy I have been waiting for you to update for a while now (on aff.net) but now that I have read this I want to be greedy and ask for more *grin* I love your writing style and can't wait to see how the next chapter goes. thank you
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Reviewed By: Magiknight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you've done with the story. It's great to accidently come acrossed such an unusual plot.
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Reviewed By: Secret14 On: December 06, 2007 11:29 CST
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I really love you story so far!!! You read the Dark Hunter books by Sherrilyn Kenyon? I like them. Just started to read the Anita Blake books myself. Are they any good? They seem really interesting.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 09:08 CDT
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5 months since an update, but the story is still strong. I want to read the rest of this story, and I want to read to the end SOON! Please update this awesome story to it's conclusion sometime in the near future, this story rocks.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Aki_Kokoro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gosh! You're a great writer and we wish more of this fanfic. A great blend of Anita Blake and Harry Potter. And guess what, you've even made me look at Anita in a very different light. Thank you and keep up the awesome work!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I haven't had the chance to just sit down and read your fics for so long, and now I'm so glad I could. This fic is absolutely amazing, seriously. I love the way you've written the characters, especially their interactions, and their behaviours and thought processes, all the juicy behind-the-scenes individual pieces that breathe life into long fics like this. Harry is brilliantly written, with just the right amount of inner strength without overwhelming us with the cliched weaknesses that other writers tend to give him. He's not all-powerful, but still human and you've made it easy for the reader to empathise with him without pulling out the pity card. Richard is superbly written too, with glimpses into his character that make him 'real' instead of just a convenient background-slash-plot device. I really, really like the pairings, and you've given Requiem such an amazing 3-dimensional personality, not to mention the delicious rendition of Jason and both of their interactions with Harry. Your OCs are simply perfect. Truly, simply perfect. They're nowhere near being Mary-Sue or Gary-Stu's, and you have no idea how much I admire you to be able to write them as you have. I really don't know what else to say, except -gush-gush-gush-fangirlish-squeal- You've really made my day with this story. I'd like to beg you to continue this, but I'll simply hope eternally instead...honest. However, should you write more, I'll love you forever. Hugs, ~Shi-koi~
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Reviewed By: chriswiz1 On: February 11, 2007 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! What a story! Now the only problem is waiting for the next chapter. I can see the trends for the basic story line but I have no idea if you are going to throw kinks into the works or just how you will write the events happening. That is the entertainer's job, mine is to let you know that I appreciate your literary efforts and patiently (HA!) await further updates of your delightful saga. Thank you for sharing.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kallipso [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 17:19 CST
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Whimpers in a corner. I have been waiting for this to update for forever. I love the new chapter keep it coming.
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Title: Mistress
Reviewed By: Cataclysmic On: October 18, 2006 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant storyline I absolutely loved it, original but well gelled crossover. can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: September 19, 2006 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter and hope to read more. Poor Richard and Harry didn't even leave a note.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage() On: August 15, 2006 12:29 CDT
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I LOVE IT!!! *grins* I'm soooooo glad that you updated! I've reread this story twice! ^^
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 17:02 CDT
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I am kind of surprised that you don't have more reviews. This is a good fic. I know I have reviewed for this fic before, but I wanted to re-read it after I have gotten myself into the Anita Blake series. I am obviously not as far along as you are. I am just getting donw with The Killing Dance. I do have alot of the necissary information however, and I do not have to guess on quite as much as I did the first time. I am sad that Edward isn't in this fic yet. He is so far my favorite character. Don't ask me why, he just have some strange quirks about him. Eating steak while watching a movie about a woman being eaten by a werewolf and werepanther. Lol. I have to say that re-reading this has given me some of my own ideas for a HP AB crossover/fusion. Mine seems to be a little happier than yours (Atleast how it goes in my head) but with alot more sex. Mhmm... I just wanted to review again so maybe it would tempt you to writing another chapter. I love this fic, and I await for you to continue! Ja!
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: May 14, 2006 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic I've reread it about three times now and I'm dieing waiting for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. Mist
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 08:27 CDT
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Mhmm...Sorry to say this, but ABOUT BLOODY TIME! Nothing on you, and I feel that Harry does deserve some peace and quiet, and love..(-Eyes Jason-) But it isn't a HP fic if it doesn't have Ugly and his goons in it. I think it will be more interesting now, since Harry is now snake lord. And as I remember, snakes were somethig that Hary had a lot of problems with. HOWEVER! I also see a down side to this whole 'Snake Lord' and stuff. It makes me think that Harry is becomming more like Voldemort. Not in the 'Evil Killing All Muggles' type, but as in 'I Love Snakes So Much I Want To Look Like Them' type. That might just be me. I am considered crazy by some.
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