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| "Naruto meets Yugi- Duelist & Ninja Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] | Title: My opinion on this fanfic
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 15:36 CST
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A Yu-Gi-Oh!/Naruto crossover, ne? I'm not exactly the biggest fan of Naruto, but I must say that this fanfic has had both good and bad points for me. I'm nowhere near as far in the Manga as this fic takes place. I must be the only Naruto-familiar person here whose knowledge of the series doesn't come from fansubs and fan-translated Manga! I'll take my Naruto legally through Shonen Jump and Toonami, arigatou. Anyway, in spite of the fact that it'll be at least 8-10 years before Shonen Jump reaches the point you're at (as of the January 2006 issue, they're up to Chapter 78, where Hinata is about to fight Neji), one of the good points was the opportunity to glimpse a little into the future of the story. So, even after nearly 300 chapters, the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Art of the Doppleganger) is still Naruto's best move?! (*LOL*) Speaking of Jutsu moves, one of low points of the story was the so-called "Ninja battle." No offense, but that battle was one of the stupidest things I've ever read. With all of those cliché-sounding Jutsus being shouted, it all sounded like some lame-ass, poorly-dubbed martial-arts film. Concerning the romantic pairings, I find that idea of a Yugi+Temari pairing to be...um...well, I consider Temari to be somewhat...well, kind of ugly. The Naruto+Hinata pairing? Hinata's "Byakugan" eyes creep me out! I'm surprised that Naruto's not creeped out by them, as well! In closing, all I can say is "Keep this fic going! Bye-bye!"
| Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 18:47 CST
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Intense ninja battle!!! I finally saw the episode where Haku used the Thousand Needles of Death and his Crystal Ice Mirrors. Deadly! I can't wait to see Naruto use his Nine-Tailed Fox Spirit! I really like the chapter and the battles weren't disappointing! I feel sorry for Hinata being injured by Itachi whom Sasuke wants to defeat so badly. Good thing Naruto and Hinata protected Yugi from harm and Yugi was able to defeat Itachi even though Sasuke felt anger that Yugi got to him first. If Sakura was stonger and tougher, she would've fought Sasuke for being a traitor to the Konoha Village. I wonder when Zabusa and Haku are going to be in the story? Maybe they are going to appear as enemies or allies. Hope you update!!!
| Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 20:26 CST
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Awesome chapter. The Yugi/Temari pairing won and it was a fair vote for the pairing. Sakura didn't say "Sasuke-kun!" as she usually does since he's a traitor of the Konohagakure Village. I wonder why the Sound-nins want Yugi for some obvious reason. Probably make their clan stronger? Well, I'll find out in the next chapter. I'm surprised that Kuriboh got to hug Temari. It's so kawaii!!!!! So, both Sasuke and Kakashi are fighting and they both have Sharingan symbols. Sasuke has the weaker version of the Sharingan while Kakashi has a stronger one. I didn't see the episode that Haku used a powerful jutsu called Crystal Ice Mirrors. I wonder what it does. I heard it's very powerful. I hope that Orochimaru doesn't make the same mistake like Sasuke did. Your story rocks and hopefully that you will update another exciting chapter!!! Update!!!
| Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 01:44 CST
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heh interesting, seems like the hologram is more real than it should be, they shouldn't be able to touch a hologram because it is just light...so are they really being summoned, or sort of half summoned? great chapter.
| Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 22:17 CST
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Well, with everything that he's endured over the last couple of chapters that you put him through, I'm surprised that Yugi can't just summon the monsters without a duel disc. Anyways, I'm also glad that the pairing is Temari/Yugi, and I can't wait to see the fight scene that will come up in the next chapter! Although, I'm still mad that they changed Haku's special attack to Crystal Ice Mirrors. It's Demonic, damnit! anyways, sorry for ranting, but serious, a good chapter that you have here, and I can't wait to see the fight between the two Uchida brothers fight the Uzumaki couple. Ja Ne for now!
| Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 00:49 CST
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good chapter, bet yugi will figure out how to summon actual monsters sooner or later. i mean come on with all the items in him the magical aura and reserves he'd have would have to be enough to summon a ton of monsters. then you have to think that these monsters might themselves be more powerful then the kyubbi, at least some of them. great chapter keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 21:04 CST
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Chapter 6 was very interesting!! Everyone was shocked to see how Yugi had the glowing Anubis' eye on his forehead and the dark aura around the Konoha tower. What really brought my attention was the part where Yugi explained what the Millennium Items are and what unique abilities they had. Also, I like the way the people where paying much attention to what Yugi was demonstrating his duel disk and explaining what types of Monsters,Spells,and Traps. It should be easy to remember for them since Duel Monsters are easy to play, but there are some difficult tatics in the game. I'm hoping that Yugi will remain in the Hidden Leaf Village and not the other villages like the Sand Village or the Sound Village. I change my mind about the Yugi/Temari pairing. I want the Yugi/Sakura pairing since Sasuke is part of Orochimaru's Sound-nin. Hope you update as soon as you can!!
| Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 14:48 CST
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Awesome chapter!! Did someone make Yugi pissed that he embraced the power of the Shadow Realm on purpose? So now, it explains how the 7 Millennium Items have their own abilities of how they can choose a host of the item if they are worthy of being capable of the item. I think that Sakura is better off with Sasuke than Yugi because I know she will be yearning for Sasuke. I'm still voting for the Yugi/Temari pairing. I'm glad that Naruto is happy to see Gaara alive and well again. Tsunade seems curious of the duel monsters, especially Prenumbral Soldier Lady because she said it reminded her as a teenager except for the armor and the sword. Well, keep writing more chapters!!!!
| Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 05:11 CST
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cool story, man some one really pissed off yugi, now he is embracing the power of the shadow realm and his egyptian heritage. bet he can summon the monsters from his cards into reality without the duel disk. there are a couple ninja monsters and those would be interesting to have defend yugi, i can see a crimson ninja defending yugi. great story keep writing.
| Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 19:20 CST
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Wow! Tsunade looks like she's interested to see what Yugi can do to demonstrate the way he summons his duel monter cards. Temari and Gaara are brother and sister? I did not know that. I'm hoping that the technicians will have the Duel Disk in perfect shape as it was eariler when Yugi passed out after he revived Gaara. Naruto called Hinata 'Hinata-chan'? That was sweet! I hope that Orochimaru doesn't make Yugi to be in his clan. Well, I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 17:38 CST
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This is very interesting!! I hope that Yugi will be paired with Temari. It's easy to remember the village names of where the shinobis/kunoichis come from and what attributes they have. I wonder which clan is going to have Yugi on their team since they want someone strong. Hinata really likes Naruto and I wish she didn't feel nervous around him so she can have the courage to tell Naruto her feelings towards him. Sasuke joined forces with Orochimaru?! I though he was on Naruto's, Sakura's and Kakashi's side! I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Update!!
| Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 22:36 CST
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Very interesting, and Temari is a good choice, especially since she would want to repay him somehow for reviving her brother and the Kazekage. I'm just glad that the Hinata/Naruto couple is left untouched. I get goosebumps every time I see Sakura with Naruto. Anyways, I wonder what will happen when the two of Team Seven and their sensai see Uchida Sasuke once again. It was funny to see Tsunmade's assistant and her helpers act like kids during Christmas, but hopefully they put his duel disk back together. After the adventure is over though, what will he do, Stay here in Konoha, or go back to Domino that is what I wonder. Anyways, good chapter. Hey, maybe if they go back to the Village in the Mist, Yugi can revive Haku, what do you think?
| Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 17:07 CDT
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Your friend knows more about Naruto than you? I'm a rookie too for Naruto until I get to know every character like I did for Yugioh, DragonballZ and Gundam Wing. Itachi Uchiha is the brother of Sasuke Uchiha and he was the one who killed everyone in the village he lived in, including his own parents. He is scary! He and Sasuke don't get along too well. What I enjoyed about the story was that Yugi was able to revive Gaara back to life and having to communicate with Slifer the Sky Dragon. What I felt about Naruto crying is that he understands the pain he feels of losing a friend and Yugi felt the same way. Do you remember that Marik took over Joey's mind and used him to destroy Yugi so he can take over the world? It's sort of similar to what I read. I felt bad for Sakura of what she felt about Sasuke. I want to know when Sakura is going to confront her feelings towards Sasuke, even though he doesn't like her? Hope you turn pro to learn a lot more about Naruto as I am now. Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 20:00 CDT
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Hi! Long time no see! I'm now known as Diamond Princess because I got banned. I haven't read any of your stories in awhile. You don't like the Sakura/Sasuke pairings? Well, there is a lot of fanfics that has that a whole lot of Sakura/Sasuke and Naruto/Sasuke pairings. I don't know which girl will be paired with Yugi because I've seen a few episodes of Naruto and it's awesome!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and love the story and the plot!! Update!!!!
| Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 21:57 CDT
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Wow, Marlene, you did a wonderful job beta-reading here. And DJ, good choice of choosing which section to bring Yugi in, but it's a shame that you had to end it there! Anyways, I still stick by with either Sakura or Ino since they were love struck over Sasuke and now that he went to the snake's side, and you also said that you were going to bring him back? That's going to be hard for a lot of people within Konoha, especially on the female population. Anyways, I heard that you hate the couple of Sakura and Sasuke, but you haven't given anyone a reason as to why you dislike that couple. Anyways, I think it should be Sakura out of the two since she was there when she saw him come out of the rift, unlike Ino who's back in the village, I assume. Anyways, she is also just getting over Sasuke so Yugi will be the perfect person to heal the wounds for Uzumaki Naruto and Haruno Sakura. I'm glad you did it that way and not the way that the dub has.
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