Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 21:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, Marlene, you did a wonderful job beta-reading here. And DJ, good choice of choosing which section to bring Yugi in, but it's a shame that you had to end it there! Anyways, I still stick by with either Sakura or Ino since they were love struck over Sasuke and now that he went to the snake's side, and you also said that you were going to bring him back? That's going to be hard for a lot of people within Konoha, especially on the female population. Anyways, I heard that you hate the couple of Sakura and Sasuke, but you haven't given anyone a reason as to why you dislike that couple. Anyways, I think it should be Sakura out of the two since she was there when she saw him come out of the rift, unlike Ino who's back in the village, I assume. Anyways, she is also just getting over Sasuke so Yugi will be the perfect person to heal the wounds for Uzumaki Naruto and Haruno Sakura. I'm glad you did it that way and not the way that the dub has.
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