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Reviewed By: ShadowKano [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 20:14 CST
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Sorry i meant to say "Deyanira CAN'T speak"
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Reviewed By: ShadowKano [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 20:04 CST
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Erm well the slant bars are thoughts, and since Deyanira can speak seeing as she has no mouth, i thought it would be at least nice for her to have a say. she gets a mouth or rather the use of one soon.
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Title: nice chap
Reviewed By: demonicpride32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 10:01 CST
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i liked this chap, Kano...i mean you really twisted discriptive words to meet the ambience of this story...quite like myself, i do the same. it's just... i noticed that you don't use quotation marks mostly, just slant bars...what's up?
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (hmmm....i'm at school) On: December 14, 2005 12:21 CST
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and you just left it there, huh? What kind of hellspawn are you?! THAT was a cliffhanger if you didn't know!! of course you did! update update update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 15:43 CST
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isn't sulking and quietly fuming the same thing? yeah i think it is. anywho, brownies do rock but i wouldn't mind You Know Who doing a bit of sucking in the near future. *grins* hurry up and update!! i give this chap a 10+ along with a half bottle of gin...i needed the other half for stuff. *grins again*
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Reviewed By: dkAdeena [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 15:03 CST
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I have to give you credit, you've done fairly well so far. Don't let the *other* reviewers get to you. Continue please. Loved the cake and brownie argument. Thanks for thinking so much of our argument that you included something similar. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 07:59 CST
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O,O wtf?! where's the rest? you can't stop there. the fight and the new guy and that is just such a......UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 06:23 CDT
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why the hell is me and bombayoni the only ones reviewing?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay okay, here i am to review. what in the hell is mother thinking? oh, and was that 6 at the end hacking into their little conversation? easedropping at its finest! *give 6 martini* cheerio and what not! update...BOTH YOUR FICS!!! oh and don't forget that one that has the spanish title. i can't friggin remember what it was called but you know what i'm talking about!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 07:32 CDT
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mother wasn't that big of a bitch. i expected a little more resistance but 6 is just so damn sexy ::glomps 6:: so what happens next? more blood and guts or what?
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Reviewed By: ShadowKano [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 09:30 CDT
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The first five units were destroyed two years prior to the beginning of this, and it wasnt a nice destruction
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!! ::winces at 6's gorey arm gouging scene:: so i don't remember you talking to me about the shadow thing so i'm a little on edge trying to wait to see what happens next. i really like this! ::looks innocent:: so 6 is the sixh unit, right? what exactly happened to 1-5? ::winks:: just a 'question'. ja!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 06:23 CDT
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LOL to Bombay! you can't insult S! she'll either threaten you directly or indirectly. and ::raspberries to you:: for being so mean. if you're confused...it's to the both of you! now update or shall....never write another lemon for the rest of forever!!!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 19:04 CDT
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I take it back! The first two were geat, and so were 3 and 4..... I give you tens in all! Please, just spare my computer!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate it. It's horrible. you get zeroes uin everything because it's bad and I hate you. The only redeeming quality is Sixth himself.
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