| "We Will Become Silhouettes" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 13:23 PDT
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This was a sad sad chapter. At first when Sess went into the room and saw the bloody sheet, I thought that Naraku would just show him the body Lycani so there would be moments of agony, then relief and hope, followed by the horror of what was really done to his mate. Not that this wasn't bad enough. Recalling the memory of his own father's torture and death in the form of his mate....twisted. You do a good Naraku. Sess was a complete bastard to Inuyasha though. In my opinion, he need to have at least one more chapter of he might die angst and then a couple or four more of Inu's rejection of him! Thanks for writing for us. I have really enjoyed reading this chapter and this story in general. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that's soo sad you can't let Inu die!!!! and what will happen when his father comes home and he see the way everything is? Will he come to see sessy in a new light and understand how much of bitch hie so-called mate is? And will other come to help kill naraku? AHHHH you update tell me or i'll lose my mind!
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Reviewed By: Shiwasuda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 22:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done reading all 19 chapters! Gyaaah! You be an Angst Diety! Seriously. But I love it. Oh, dear, I don't know what else to say except for I adore the story as messed up as Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's relationhip is. I don't think it would work if it wasn't angtsy. But the ending of the last chapter! *dies* For some reason, I picture Inuyasha as being nearly gutted... -_-; (Poor baby) Oh, and by the way, what movie did you get the whole hot wax over the er..male extremities scene from? Hope you update within the next month, or so? ^_^
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 11:57 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't see this story ending well for Sessh and Yasha. I think I've said that already...but really after everything that's happened and everything that is happening, "if" you were going to try and give them a happy ending together, how would you pull it off? I just dont see it happening. But then I'm a sap and I hope that you are able to keep them together...if that's what you plan on doing anyway. But as always, good chapter and can't wait for the next ^^
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 23:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! you updated!! Is the sky falling??? haha well I had thought you forget all about ur fans here. OMG I need to see this through to the end!!! I mean will Inu & Sess ever be together????? Will inu-love die @_@ NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH please let naraku get his 1,000 times over!! Till next time. (and i hope that's really really soon!^^)
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 13:59 PST
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Oh my god! You haven't updated for ages! It was refreshing to see you haven't missed a beat! Good job!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: January 31, 2007 09:44 PST
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I can't believe that you got through that entire chapter without telling us what had happened with Inuyasha! ARRGGGHHHH! At the bottom of each section I kept expecting to read something and each time you just left me hanging. Excellent use of suspense...excellent. I hope that you don't make us all wait 2 more months to see what has happened and what will happen. One comment though. I find Sess's attitude toward Inuyasha to be completely overboard. it is like the guy has some sort of multiple personality disorder going on or something. One moment he loves him, the next he sleeps with someone else just to hurt him, the next he attacks his friends when he finds out that Inu has done the same thing, then he professes his love again, then he rapes him, and now he is ALL pissed off at Naraku for doing the same thing physically that he has just done mentally. Sess is in some need of some SERIOUS councelling or something. A good swift kick in the ass. I'm glad that Inu-papa started that at least. And speaking of Inu-papa, what has he been doing this whole time that his son has been becoming Angst's Bitch? Now before you think that I haven't enjoyed this chapter or this story, I have. Really. It takes something that I really like to get this fired up about it. Thanks for writing and I hope that you are able to write more soon. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: silenthoughts [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 16:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, it's my favorite one to read on midiaminor! You are so good at everything and I love it! I hope you get well soon and I hope you update soon as well! Your chapters are so good that a lot of the time I have to stop half way into it to collect myself before I freak out! This story is full of so much suspense and drama, and romance, and violence, and I absolutely love it!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 13:35 PST
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I am sssssssssooooooooooooo into this story!!!! It's the sh*t! I need a new chapter!! Please give us a new chapter!! THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU!!!!~ B reading U!!!
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Title: Just found you!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 16:15 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story, and I must say....BRAVO!!!! This is one of the best I've read so far! I'm putting it in my favorites, so I can keep up with it. I wonder what you have in store for this odd couple? Again BBBRRRRAAAAAAAVVVVVVVVOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Until the next chapter~ B reading U!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 23:33 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't kill him off!! I know you're not going to kill him...But you're going to do something nasty to him aren't you? ::sigh:: This story is really fucked up you know. But in a good way lol. And I loved the candle bit. I personally think you should have had him bite the bish off, but hey that works too XD. Can't wait for another update, sooner rather than later. Get well soon.
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 10:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive been reading this for along time now and wow! I can't think of anything else to say...
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 19:26 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought once the bond was broken, they couldn't be mates again? Or is that only true after the bond is COMPLETELY broken? And I thought you said things would get better. I don't see how things oculd possibly get better from this point, but I guess I'll just have to trust you. As always, can't wait till the next chapter, sooner rather than later XD.
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Title: loveit?
Reviewed By: silenthoughts [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I have ever posted a comment, and yet I have been reading this beautifully touching story since it first came out. I couldn't stop myself from finally reviewing after this chapter...hell it made me cry! You have a way with words and you have come up with an excellent plot. I have read a lot of fictions dealing with yaoi (cause I love them!). Most have little to no plot (or a very bad one) and the writer just seems to care for the sex scenes. Or the complete opposite happens and the writer comes up with this overly elaborate plot and completely forgets about everything else. I always check out stories involving yaoi or anything of the sort, but I rarely ever stick with the story. The few times I do stick with a story I end up forgetting about it (cause it doesn't grab my attention). You on the other hand have managed to add not only a wonderful plot, but you also didn't forget about the characters. You have done an absolutely amazing job with the characters, you did not stray very far from their original personalities at all. And to top it off, you made sure to subtly change a characters feelings or thoughts (mainly speaking about Sesshoumaru here)...you didn't rush into your story or hastily make either character care or feel love...you allowed your characters time to develop (though a part of me was dying because it was getting so intense at times). You have created a very original story and I fncking love it...
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 15:54 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yasha's in TROUBLE! Is this fic going to end well at all? Poor Lyc, I feel sorry for the girl, getting used like that. But Sess really does deserve to get hurt (damn that's cold, and I love the Fluffy, but it's true). Really hope you update soon...
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