| "A New Life" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 18:40 CDT
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UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 18:13 CDT
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Great chapter, but if Imay ask do we ever get to see what happens to InuYasha? Will there be some sort of conflict between brothers about Kagome?
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 24, 2005 14:33 CDT
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I like. I really do. he's melting even more. When is he going to admit to himself, if not her, that he cares/loves a human?
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv the story and luv ur style of writing please update soon I don't know how long i can wait 4 the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy Jr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 19:49 CDT
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*Faints* Lady of the West. OMFG!!!!! Yeyness! I can't wait to see how this is going to go! Laters, Sesshy Jr
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 22, 2005 15:49 CDT
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Cool. he's melted some more. now all he has to do is pay attention to that little voice inside his head. great chapter. I loved her outfit.
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 21, 2005 22:03 CDT
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I have only one thing to say. PLEASE don't turn him back into the ass he's been. or at least not totally. otherwise, thanks. I liked it. i really really did.
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Reviewed By: dajhgnkndzcmgbvnzdjf On: October 21, 2005 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Katherine On: October 20, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 20, 2005 18:34 CDT
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Don't worry. I'll forgive you. after all you did just write about passion, and grief all in one. well done i must say. but i am looking forward to a looooooooong chapter. even though i can't talk. mine are pretty short also. keep up the good work. luvs ya.
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