| "Tenkuu" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yue Moonstone On: July 15, 2002 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really good. I hope you write more, and make it a Usagi/Vegeta fic. There are hardly many fan fiction stories with them together. It would be nice if Gohan was her twin brother.
Ciya,
Yue |
Reviewed By: britt On: January 01, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good story and a i hope you finish it soon!!! I also think you should put gohan and usagi together!!
well see ya
britt |
Reviewed By: rino_serenity On: June 12, 2002 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue writing i want to finish this it is really good |
Reviewed By: Eo On: May 31, 2002 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey very good i love it and i want to read more so up date soon. I'll be checking for up dates and as for the pairing i think it should be gohan. NE Way just up date ok. Eo |
Reviewed By: Alison Alexander On: April 25, 2002 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story.Vegeta/Serena please,or make Vegeta her brother. |
Reviewed By: Joanne/Joey On: April 11, 2002 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!I Love your story. Oh yeah I think you should make this a Usagi/Gohan fic. |
Reviewed By: L On: March 16, 2002 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I particularily love these type of fics no matter what the anime types are. This one is very eye catching. Keep up this fic. I'll be watching for more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Joanne/Joey On: March 14, 2002 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is awesome. I also think that Serena and Gohan should go together cause they would make such a nice couple. Please please hurry up and write another chapter. |
Reviewed By: Firefly-chan On: March 14, 2002 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone does the betray thing so that is why you only got a 7 in creativity, but the blind part is new! I think she should be with vegi-head! I dunno why, i just think the couple is cute. Anyway, please get more out soon! |
Reviewed By: Selene*Yuy* [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like so far but you need to work on your grammer and spelling. Other than that not bad, keep up to good work.
Moon Princess |
Reviewed By: angel_of_death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey dude!!! can u plz make this a Gohan and Usagi fic plz coz yah well can u plz!!
Dani |
Reviewed By: Pincess_Serenity1234 On: March 13, 2002 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I choose Gohan and Usagi! And make sure that you make that story a little bit long. Also please write more! |
Reviewed By: angel_of_death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey dude!!! can u plz make this a Gohan and Usagi fic plz coz yah well can u plz!!
then Dani |
Reviewed By: Odangoed one On: March 11, 2002 10:47 CST
Comment/Review:
NANI!! Where is the next chapter!!I want to read it so bad!! *slaps al the stupid senshi and kills mamo baka* Please psot a new cahpter and and soon!! |
Reviewed By: Princess_Serenity1234 On: March 09, 2002 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello? I like to know what happen to Serena ya know! Please write more! |
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