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Reviewed By: RenoxSephiroth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 07:29 CDT
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Wow Ch. 30 had me in tears. Poor Irvy! Seifer is going to try and rape Zell isn't he? Though you can't rape the willing now can ya?
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, still ever so lovely and wonderful. I'm really torn in who I'm rooting for here... though for a moment there Zell was starting to sound a little like he was more entranced with the 'beauty' that is Irvine rather than Irvine himself. I dunno, I'm probably just reading too deep into this. I'll continue with each chapter and let you guys tell the story. I'm really hoping for some happiness for Seifer in here so I'm wondering just where he will find it. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: tenshi_janai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOh I love you gurls. Thank you so much for updating, now I have something to read when I'm in class. And I'll be sure to review as often as I can .
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! Such a tease. I want more, more I say! I'm so enamored of this fic, it's sheerly ridiculous. I literally pumped my fist in the air when I found the update e-mail in my inbox. So enamoured that I stopped working on my own update and chapter to read this one right away, and yet I feel like I am being teased. I must know more, I must! Please, update soon. I love this pairing and this fic. You are simply put, a genius!
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Reviewed By: IzzyP On: July 30, 2006 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG that last chapter was so amazing. i can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really starting to feel sorry for Seifer. I'm a big fan of Seifer/Zell pairings but I like Zell/Irvine too and now i'm torn! I don't know which one I want more for this fic! You're doing a great job! I can't wait to find out more. I've been reading this from the beginning and I figured it was about time that I made a comment. You keep everyone in a character that I enjoy. No unnecessary nickname calling, no uncalled for OOCness, etc, etc. I noticed a few grammar errors but that's no big thing! It was still well read.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 11:40 CDT
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This was a very happy chapter! I have to admit, though, that I'm getting anxious about where this is going. You know, with the whole Seifer thing. Anyway, still really enjoying the fic and looking forward to more! (Oh, and your moive and TV choices are beyond reproach! *w*)
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Reviewed By: RenoxSephiroth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 18:08 CDT
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Wow I absolutely love this story! I started reading it on Adult FanFiction and my friend told me about this site and how there were more chapters to it. I couldn't believe it! I'm so glad that the story was able to be continued!! You guys rock!!!!! I'll be waiting for the update!!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 11:46 CDT
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Yea for updates! Kind of a scary chapter! I don't think I like Seifer when he's angry and I especially don't like him when he's angry at Irvine! I hope that Zell's plan works. He clearly owes Irvine more than an apology and Seifer's an idiot not to realize that! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Thanks for brightening my otherwise dismal Saturday!
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Title: Damn....
Reviewed By: Devioud Lil Devil On: May 10, 2006 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My god.... I so wanna cry right now. *shakes head* make them happy soon ok.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 10:55 CDT
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Honestly, it's perfect. It's the reaction any person would have had. I can't wait to see how Zell goes about fixing this. Oh, he'd better do it fast, 'cause I can't bear to see Irvine suffer anymore! Excellent writing. as always! I love this story and am really looking forward to more. I'll be sad when it's over!
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Reviewed By: YaoSnoozie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(While I hate to give unconstructive 10's across the board, I can't think of anything significant to mark you down for) Your stories are smuttily stupendous('xcept for the non-thmex-filled ones*^^* Those are fantastic for other reasons) I look forward to every week's new chapter of 'Lightning'(I hope the title means what I think it does...does it?...wark?)~ You're story's moving at a very readable pace, quickly enough to move it along, but slowly enough to dish out the details that Zell's sweet seduction deserves. I love the way you meshed Seifer's mean streak with Zell's good intentions, very believable. I adore sweet Irvine's frightened reaction to Rikan's forceful attentions too. I can't wait for the seed-to-be and sensei to coax him into bed*^^*~ I do so need my fix of men making out, so please don't dissapoint with your methodical posting of oh-so-innocent Irvine's scrumptious stumblings into the open arms of the blonde bishonen duo...and Rikan's hospitalization...I'm crossing my fingers for that too. (Ah, how I envy your reliable writing. I'm doomed to finish my fics before I start posting or risk the readers rath)
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Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: March 20, 2006 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. i can't wait to read the next chapter. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 18, 2006 03:57 CST
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i love this fanfic! i hope u update soon! :)
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