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| "Someday You Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: Someday You Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 00:29 CST
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awe that was an aweful cliffy! i really want to know what happens now. can't wait til the next chapter is posted! 8D
| Title: Someday You Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: January 05, 2006 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, si, si me gusta...no, me encanta! hehehe. What a lovely little story you have created! Its nice and refreshing. I do love a good Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing. It's really nice to read something that doesnt suck (because lets be honest here... you have to skim through a lot of crap before finding something thats worth while) Over all, I would say that this story is like finidng a pretty diamond. It's definitely not cubic zirconia, heehe. Wow, I am definitely in a weirdo mood tonight. I loved the cleverness behind your words, I dont remember what chapter it was, but there was one point where Kagome was in a through process and about to say the word "bitch," but then Sesshoumaru ended up shouting it at her, hehehe. I can't wait to see how things turn out. I'm sure that your story will quickly gain popularity and pretty soon you will have so many positive reviews that you will not know what to do with them. Keep up the great work and I cannot wait for more! Ciao!
| Title: just luv it
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
pls update a.s.a.p
| Reviewed By: sarahcant08(not signed in) On: January 01, 2006 14:38 CST
Comment/Review:
exquisite
| Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 02:52 CST
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Another good chapter. The interaction between Kagome and Sessy could get very interesting ^^ Anyway, hope you put up a new chappie soon! Happy New Year!
| Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 18:58 CST
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Great story so far. I love the way you tied in the Death Cab song!! I love Death Cab, they're amazing! Can't wait for the next chapters... update soon ^^
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha_Fanatic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, nice job on getting the two main characters introduced in the story, I feel sorry for Kagome though, anyway your style of writing was good so you got a 10. You have very few spelling errors so you got a 10. Your creativity is very unique which in other words, awesome, so I gave you a 10. I didn't think your fanfic was boring at all, but you should add more to chapters (even though the fanfic I made had short chapters, lol, I'm trying to make them longer, I havn't written any fanfics here yet) so that we have more to read...Lastly your story rules so you got 10, which means you got a perfect score, congratulations!!! Oh about the Sesshomaru and Kagome meeting, there's many ways to get them to meet, like at the park. Kagome is sitting on a bench in the park trying think (whatever...she could be mad, sad, or just happened to go there) and Sesshomaru goes there to the park, the place were first started hating humans and sees her...(that's a possibility) Inuyasha could be sick and Kagome has to bring him his assignment and instead of seeing Inuyasha finds Sesshomaru...(Inuyasha can either be really sick, or ditched, which ever, It's your story) There's the whole bump into each other thing where they fight and end up liking each other... Kagome could end up breaking something of Sesshomaru's and have to work to pay it off...(Kind of what you thought of, I guess) then there's yours...whichever you choose, but like what they said follow your gut, and update soon, have fun, bye!!! | Title: from: fluffys_mate_kaya
Reviewed By: fluffys_mate_kaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:34 CDT
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well, you said that the only idea you got was that she should work for, him, but it's been used too much. It's better if you just follow your gut feeling, the story will turn out better. good luck
| Title: from: fluffys_mate_kaya
Reviewed By: fluffys_mate_kaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:33 CDT
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well, you said that the only idea you got was that she should work for, him, but it's been used too much. It's better if you just follow your gut feeling, the story will turn out better. good luck
| Title: Someday You Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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