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Title: Bravo Bravo
Reviewed By: Dimples91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh! this story is sooooooooooo good! That sceech owl, as u put it, is an evil bitch! anyway can't wait till u do more!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO MS.DENEIL ARE YOU ASLEEP PLEZE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaitou7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your story its great and it is well written I like how you portrayed the characters and well yah that's it sry i can't think of anything else bye
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Reviewed By: Kiki14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job! I like how you've portrayed this story, very original. I mean really original. First Ed abuse story I've read. (Also, I hate Winry sometimes, she can be such a jerk!) It is a little odd that a twenty year old like Ed could be bossed around like that for so long without anyone noticing, but I'm sure that you'll pull it off. Your a great writer. Please continue to update I'd like to see what happens! I really love your story! Toodles!
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Title: Sry
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops Sry.Spelled DeNeil Wrong.....My Bad 0.o Again Update Often!
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Title: *Blinks Uncontroably*
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bliks*Miss.DeNiel You've Out Done Yourself!1This Is An Amazing Story.Keep Up The Great Work!!
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