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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story's really good, but we could do with out the evil clifhanger...
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Title: !!! -.-; !!!!
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ashley!! Don't Keep Me In Susspence!Update Soon.This Is Getting Real Good.Your Leaving Me On a Cliffy!! -.-; Holly
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Title: Awesome Chapter
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 06:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your new chapters! They are totally awesome!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally love it! awesome! i cant wait for the next chapter! i wonder who it is?
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 13:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update real soon!
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Reviewed By: Dimples91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
good good keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Dimples91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 15:26 CST
Comment/Review:
wow..........wow.........ummmmmmmmm......i don't know what to say!!!!!! very good keep it up!!!!!!
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Title: OOH MY GOD!!!
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DID ROY JUST SAY HIS FULLMETAL ANGEL!?!??!!??I SWEAR YOU AND I ARE THE QUEENS OF DRAME...YOU JUST HAPPEN TO BE OLDER^.^;.KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK ASH!!TEN ACROSS AS USUAL!!!
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Title: GREAT(As usual)
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Ashley!!Its Getting more susspenceful.I HATE WINRY!!WINRY HATERS UNITE!!!Thanks for the kind words.i'll cherish then like i've cherished anthing anyones ever said to me.Keep up the great work and update often(P.S In Social Studies Were learning about the map of canada soo i'll keep you in mind as we learn!^.^)
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Title: Bravo Bravo
Reviewed By: Dimples91 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh! this story is sooooooooooo good! That sceech owl, as u put it, is an evil bitch! anyway can't wait till u do more!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO MS.DENEIL ARE YOU ASLEEP PLEZE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaitou7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your story its great and it is well written I like how you portrayed the characters and well yah that's it sry i can't think of anything else bye
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Reviewed By: Kiki14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job! I like how you've portrayed this story, very original. I mean really original. First Ed abuse story I've read. (Also, I hate Winry sometimes, she can be such a jerk!) It is a little odd that a twenty year old like Ed could be bossed around like that for so long without anyone noticing, but I'm sure that you'll pull it off. Your a great writer. Please continue to update I'd like to see what happens! I really love your story! Toodles!
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Title: Sry
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops Sry.Spelled DeNeil Wrong.....My Bad 0.o Again Update Often!
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Title: *Blinks Uncontroably*
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bliks*Miss.DeNiel You've Out Done Yourself!1This Is An Amazing Story.Keep Up The Great Work!!
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