| "Small Story: A Tale of Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Narukaaaaa! On: December 25, 2002 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs to be more fics with Rin and Sesshoumaru! This really caught my attention. Not too mushy at all. Well written. |
Reviewed By: Frances On: December 22, 2002 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kind of shocked to see Rin in love with Sesshoumaru. Since Rin is still a little girl in the manga and he's raising her, it was strange to think of these two as a couple. But you do pull it off. I'll definitely read more. |
Reviewed By: Maxelle On: December 16, 2002 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written and thoughtout. I give you props for writing a sweet story. Really captured my interest. Please write more. |
Reviewed By: Christopher J.W. On: December 12, 2002 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really like that this story focuses on Rin and her love Sesshomaru. Very compelling. |
Reviewed By: Excel Saga On: December 04, 2002 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative work. I've found only a few good Rin/Sess stories out there that weren't poorly disguised porn. Really enjoyed this. |
Reviewed By: Nabi-chan On: December 02, 2002 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! All your stories are great. That's all I've got to say about that. |
Reviewed By: Mia On: December 02, 2002 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm finding more stories now a days with these two as a couple. At first I was repulsed by the pairing since he raised her,but you really make it work. Great story. |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: November 27, 2002 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sessomaru had never smiled, let alone cared for anyone. He had finally come to discover the paradox that was Rin. |
Reviewed By: Michelle On: October 05, 2002 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dododo!! Me loovvvveeeeeee this ficcy!! Is there gonna be more? say yesssss!! Ah well, keep up the great work! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: The_Female_Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for creating this fic. I've read so many good stories gone bad. I loved your story! |
Reviewed By: Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was AMAZING!! I LOVED it!!!! You're a VERY good writer too. How you describe... How you do EVERYTHING! It's friggin' amazing XD!!!!!! Hope to read more work from you in the future =D |
Reviewed By: K. Ona On: August 01, 2002 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FRIGGIN' GOODNESS!!!!!! I'm a complete devoted fan now! Do you have any idea how long it's been since I read such a GREAT Rin/Sesshoumaru pairing?!?!? That was terrific!! Granted, a sweetly graphic romantic scene would have given the story a passionate ending, but overall it had to be the best thing I've read since...the last best one!! lol. Keep up the TERRIFIC work!! I love you for this story!!! |
Reviewed By: hiddencharm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, even though I'm not far enough into the series to have met Rin and Fluffy, I have read enough of the bios and fan fics to know their personalities rather well and you seem to have captured them nicely in this fic. Very unique plot, reminded me of the little mermaid... plotting to find love. Cute, sweet, and this next chapter.... will it be a lemon? eh? heh.. Kawai! |
Reviewed By: Kagome On: February 23, 2002 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way the writter told the story. |
Reviewed By: Solace Winter On: January 29, 2002 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This kept my attention from beginning to end, and not only since it was a very original piece (I have yet to read a Rin/Seshoumaru story and enjoy it), but because of the wonderful wording, and the often tid bits of humor deep within it. I knew that this was these characters, you captured their emotions and attitudes wonderfully, and I loved the writing of this work, a few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but seldom. GOOD LUCK! |
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