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| "Small Story: A Tale of Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: hiddencharm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, even though I'm not far enough into the series to have met Rin and Fluffy, I have read enough of the bios and fan fics to know their personalities rather well and you seem to have captured them nicely in this fic. Very unique plot, reminded me of the little mermaid... plotting to find love. Cute, sweet, and this next chapter.... will it be a lemon? eh? heh.. Kawai! | Reviewed By: Kagome On: February 23, 2002 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way the writter told the story. | Reviewed By: Solace Winter On: January 29, 2002 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This kept my attention from beginning to end, and not only since it was a very original piece (I have yet to read a Rin/Seshoumaru story and enjoy it), but because of the wonderful wording, and the often tid bits of humor deep within it. I knew that this was these characters, you captured their emotions and attitudes wonderfully, and I loved the writing of this work, a few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but seldom. GOOD LUCK! | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
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