| "Lessons in Shinobi Love" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kikimo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 05:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If i could i would have given you a 20 on the enjoyment factor! i really enjoy the style or writing; it's fresh and not overly discrptive or boring.The content is very original; i like how it plays on the balance of love and just playing around(not like that sicko). I was sad when i came to the end of all the chapters...i have no more left to read! Keep up the fatabulous work!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life (not logged in) On: December 09, 2005 14:35 CST
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Yea! You updated! Next chapter seems like it is going to be great! I'm sorry that you hate the last two chapters so much. Personally, I think they're great! Hmmm, today is Friday...Naruto is on tonight!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life NSI On: November 21, 2005 15:46 CST
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Hm, you have 79 stories? You only posted 73 on mediaminer...:(. Anyways, I can't believe a reviewer gave you a hard time about not posting a disclaimer. I hate those things to and I just post it on the prologue/chapter 1 and say that it applies for all chapters. Anyway, another great chapter and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Great job as always.
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens all the way! I really like this story. I'm early on in the Naruto series (ep 10 or 11) but so far this is all stuff I know. Please continue writing because I would like to find out what happens next. You are a great writer and it sucks that somebody stole work from you. *mutters* stupid lazy people who are incapable of writing their own work..............
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Title: HIDDEN EMOTIONS
Reviewed By: BLUEJAY >SILVER On: November 06, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
spectacular it made me cry with joy.veRy well writen!NOW FINNISH IT!!!!I LOVED THE WHOLE IDEA OF THE STORY IT MAKES YOU THINK ABOUT HOW SAKURA FEELS.ALSO IF SASUKE COULD GET JELOUS(DUN DUN DUN)HAHA JUST KIDDING.WELL ANY WAYS LOVED IT WRITE MORE AND HAVE FUN.
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Reviewed By: wynter89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 18:50 CST
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please can you update. i think you have a good plot coming on here. i think that it is really interesting since Kakashi is one of my favorite characters!!!! good luck may kami-sama be with you
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Title: Sweet! ^^
Reviewed By: Shadow15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I've been waiting for a good Kakashi/Sakura fanfic where she's not ten years older. Please update soon, I can't wait for the next chappy! ^^
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Abarai Renji [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Do you know how long I've been waiting to read a fanfic where Kakashi and Sakura get together and she's not like, 6 years older or whatever? I hope you continue this REAL soon, I can't wait to read what happens next! ^-^ You totally rule!!
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