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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: October 31, 2005 14:04 CST
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i was tempted not to leave a review. I'm not grumpy *pouts and sulks* :P
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: October 29, 2005 23:25 CDT
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I'm not making any comment about the identity of schu's old lover still hasn't been revealed, none at all, and if i were I wouldn't mention about how mean you were being by not mentioning the person's name or distinguishing feature or anything
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Title: meanie!
Reviewed By: mm-chan On: October 27, 2005 22:36 CDT
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that's twice you've been evil! i can't believe you didn't say who it was. hmph
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Title: i beat everyone else!
Reviewed By: mm-chan On: October 26, 2005 19:41 CDT
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ok cool since you narrowed out the rest of schwarz as the abusers i've decided it has to be a member of weiss so hurry up and write so i can see more btw i'm intrigued.
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Reviewed By: CC On: October 22, 2005 19:55 CDT
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PLEASE CONTINUE! This is a great start to what I hope will be a wonderful story. Way to leave us hanging too. Please update soon.
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Title: thought i'd forgotten you ne?
Reviewed By: mm-chan On: October 21, 2005 17:00 CDT
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ok so i'm intrigued! Who's been beating the crap out of Schu? was it crawford? lil nagi's grown up? and probably hot as hell huh...lol......btw thanks for taking that thing off so when I'm too lazy to sign in i can still review :)...god you've got a demanding reviewer/reader here :)
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Reviewed By: ray777 On: October 21, 2005 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks very promising. I like the idea of grown up Nagi. I hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 07:16 CDT
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"Let me know if I should continue this or not." What you've posted so far has definitely caught my attention. I'm certainly interested in seeing where you'd go with this!
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