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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 07:36 CDT
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Ah crap! my pc is annoying the hell out of me. i can't seem to receive emails, can't receive alerts and stuff and goodness, i even emailed myself and i have not received it until now...my bf says it's some kind of virus so i'm frantically saving my files. i emailed you earlier, hope you'll receive it while we're both young. hahahaha! whoever inveted pc viruses should be crucified. anyhow, where do you want to take this story? tell me how you want this to end and we'll work from there. the twist with kouga and kikyo was umm...disturbing although i personally like kouga, i mean how could i not like someone who pursues kagome with so much enthusiasm to the point of obessession...tsk! i think it's safe to talk through media miner since my pc has gone nuts and my emails are not working... hope to hear from you, girl!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 15:01 CDT
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Oh, the fight....! update soon!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 00:28 CDT
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i'm happy that you updated. does this mean you got your muse back? play on inuyasha's affections for kagome and the hanyou's reluctance to show it, it would bring out more drama, i think. and thank you for suggesting usher's song. i downloaded it and i'm trying to write a chapter around it. keep on writing. the world is more beautiful because we write. cheers!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 00:24 CDT
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Chels, That was a nice cliffie you left. I would like to see more action though in the next chapter like how things develop between kagome-inuyasha and kikyo, you know the tragic and traditional love triangle. Ah, sesshoumaru-sama, just the mention of his name makes my knees weak, i'm kinda jealous with rin... hehehe! i think kikyo's appearance is a great intro for that story you made me, you can add that story here to make things more heated and interesting. Keep up the good work. By the way, how was your prom? update! ~aryanna~
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Reviewed By: punkerkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm liking this story already update soon please
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 04:12 CDT
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Hey, I like the plot. Interesting. Keep it up! Email me back! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: February 16, 2006 03:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, I like Inu in your fic, he's just so cool, lol. ;p. Anyways, yes write the date!!! But also write Inu and Kags little home-date too. LoL. Gotta luv em all. Once again, loved the update, and I can't wait for the next chappie!!! ;-) -TrinityK (sorry to lazy to sign in. ;P)
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. That was a dirty thing Kouga did. He should get beat on somemore. Anyway, cool story so far, and I can't wait for the next chappie!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: Chapter Five
Reviewed By: Izzie On: January 30, 2006 18:48 CST
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Well I've read your latest chapter -- awesome! I loved it! Poor Kagome. Great job, keep it up! (:
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Reviewed By: Izzie On: November 07, 2005 16:20 CST
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It's me again, hehe. I loved your newest chapter, "An Awkward Dinner." Very entertaining! I especially admire the dialogue, very good characterization! It makes me want to watch more of the "Inuyasha" series! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Izzie On: November 03, 2005 21:34 CST
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Hi again! I just finished chapter three--very good! I'll do my best to wait ever so patiently for the additional chapters! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: October 30, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!
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Reviewed By: Izzie On: October 27, 2005 15:12 CDT
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I loved the first two chapters, and am anxiously waiting to read the rest! Great job, keep up the wonderful work! (:
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Reviewed By: darkness_of_the_night [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 12:39 CDT
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Hi, i really like your story so far so plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Azalie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 07:41 CDT
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i like your storyline, its got me interested, but please spread out your stor so its not so jumbled, keep it up ^_^ thnx
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