| "A new Point of View" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Hmmmm... (strokes chin)
Reviewed By: Tury, the Master of Mediocrity On: November 03, 2005 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most people would cross Shinji and Asuka. This is a first, as far as I know... I must say I like it. I hope you are writing more.
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Reviewed By: Psiberkiwi On: October 28, 2005 07:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sod me sideways; don't stop now!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
The mind/body swap isn't a terribly original plot device, but this does have much potential for comedy. Shinji will be in for quite the surprise next chapter, I look forward to it.
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Title: nhbgbgtv
Reviewed By: paktak On: October 26, 2005 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha! Love it!^_^
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Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: Talon, Andrew On: October 26, 2005 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. Keep it up!
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