| "A Change in Him" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I hope to see the same kind of standard in my own work. the sex scenes are well written as well. even though i normally prefer A VERY descriptive account on sexual encounters. Please continue this work soon
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Reviewed By: Tai Khan On: December 21, 2005 10:31 CST
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Looking forward to more, hopefully soon. Just wished that you'd give Nabiki some redeeming qualities, instead of keeping her totally self-centered, and that you'd allow Ranma to grow both emotionally and mentally, rather than just physically. Bored to tears with the ultra-naive, bone-headed, and extremely easily manipulated idiot savant Ranma.
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Reviewed By: Shihanna On: December 14, 2005 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's quite interesting indeed. I'm glad a friend of mine told me about this story. I almost never come to MM anymore, but every now and then something quite good does pop up. I hope to see more of this as soon as possible. :D
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, sex plus plot = great lemon story. Hope you update this one soon.
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Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 00:06 CST
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Just amazing - sex and even a coherent, good plot! Yet Ranma is still true to Ranma!
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Reviewed By: narutoholic On: November 09, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice wanna see if kasumi and nabiki get ranma instead of akane
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Title: Your great fic
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! I want to read more!!!!! That fic banned me to the screen for such high-quality fanfic. I added you already to my prefered authors on my settings as well on my homepage. And I await greedily for your next installment!!!! Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 02:54 CST
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great story, bet even if ranma loses, very unlikely, the book will reject the amazons. a magic book is usually sentient, too a point.
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 01:27 CST
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Pfeh. Amazons. Fic is still good though. :)
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 12:55 CST
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Ohh, plot. I like.
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Reviewed By: JohnnyG [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 10:01 CST
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I usually don't follow lemon series for two reasons. First, they tend to have no plot. Second, the writing is often terrible. I'm glad to say that neither seems to be the case here. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: NullFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 19:58 CST
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Thanks for your comments everyone. I'd hoped to post the next chapter last wekend, but I had to work so I didn't have time. Hopefully, I'll be able to put it up sometime this week, but no promises. The next couple of chapters will be a bit more plot-oriented rather than just more sex. My image of this story has changed from when I first started writing it, however, and I have to admit that the plot/story elements are going to be less important and prevalent than the erotic ones. I agree that the last few chapters have been too unbalanced, though. Anyway, I hope you continue to read and enjoy my stories. Null Factor
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Reviewed By: Random Reviewer On: October 31, 2005 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty awesome! Everything a reader would look for to get them off for the day (j/k ^^). There are small errors in grammer, but nothing really outstanding. You've been going through several different scenes so far, but eventually you'll run out... the fanfiction is already all out sex with little plot elements. As it is now, its sex... minor plot... sex again. Not that there is anything wrong with that ^^. But wouldn't it be more interesting if it was more than just sex?
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Reviewed By: BLAQUE KAT On: October 31, 2005 06:13 CST
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I found it entertaining and burst out laughing by the sudden proposition. I can just imagine Nabiki's face when Ranma came up with the proposal. Actually I'm still snickering... Can't say anything more and can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep updating... Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: jffg On: October 31, 2005 02:17 CST
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I hope to read more soon.
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