| "Destined for Me" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 21:48 CST
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um....update Please!! with chocolate and cherries on top? lol i guess im hungry. but seriously update im really enjoying this story so please update soon it drives me crazy everytime i have to stop and wait for an update cuz i cant wait to see...read what happens next so....UPDATE!!..plz?
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! you have so got to update please!!!!!! I gotta know what happens next please!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! BTW love the plot so far lol
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Reviewed By: neosailorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 23:17 CST
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Other than that, I really love this fic, I just don't want you to forget a great character. It just confuses me and I want to know that Shippo is ok. Sorry if I offended you in any way, I just want to make sure Shippo stays in the story. To many time people forget about Shippo and I think it can ruin a great story.
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: neosailorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 23:14 CST
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Just one question. What in the world happend to Shippo?!?!? You have him getting hit and flying into the forest and then Kagome attacks because of that, but neither any of her friend are worried about what happend to him nor is he mentioned as going back with them to Keada. Sesshomaru doesn't even try to find him when he knows that his intented mate thinks of Shippo as her pup. That makes no sence, and one of the first things on Kagome's mind when she wakes up would be what happened to Shippo. Because that is the reason she attacked in the first place.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter I can't wait to read more! This is such a great story. i really like how you writen so that even though its a Sess/Kag pairing Inu-yasha isn't a complelt jerk. I Hope to read more soon. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 22:03 CST
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I like how you are putting competition in there for Sesshy. He needs to to have some resistence. I look forward to seeing how things work and what Kagome does. I don't like to see Inuyasha without a significant other but he can be a real butthead sometimes. lol I patiently await your next update.
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Reviewed By: ccwilgar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: anime_fan141 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic so far, i cant wait to read what happens next.i hope you update soon. i hope that it is a sess/kag fic. while inu/kag fics are great so are sess/kag, and we need more like this. i give it a 10 out of 10 and 5 doxen cookies.lol Jane anime_fan141
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 14:24 CDT
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You have got this story off to a great start! And the idea of seven different kinds of miko is a really neat and original idea, I think. I love the story so far and hope that you continue it. Not to mention I always like to see kikyo get a little due payback lol. Ny ways, do you plan on making kags turn miko/youkai? Make sess drool and eat those thoughts of his? lol (the part about kicking kags out when the child is old enough I mean) Oh and one other thought are you going to allow Sess to go though the well with kags? Like if they hold hands, it would be so funny to posssibly read about the look on his face when he reads about how 'ningens have evolved and youkai are in hiding but still secrectly in power' lol ny ways PLEASE UPDATE! I cant wait to read about what Sess has got planned!! lol
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you have this story going. I am usually a Kagome and Inuyasha fan too, but recently I have read some really great Sess and Kagome fics. I have broadened my reading horizones. I hope you update soon and frequently. I look forward to seeing what Sesshy has in mind for Kagome when she gets back. Keep up the great writing.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Its a wonderful start, i can't wait to read more. Please keep the story going. and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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