Reviewed By:dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 19:38 CDT Comment/Review: this is a cool story so far. I'm really interested to see where you're gonna take this. a few pointers I have is that 1. you might want to space things out more and 2. that where you explain the relationships seems a little rushed and out of place. still, good job. please update soon.