| "Paper Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: 8)
Reviewed By: pequena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY REALLY like it this fic is awesome!!!
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Title: Cuuuuute!!
Reviewed By: Super Fire Inu_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 16:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Weeeeeee!! I enjoyed VERY MUCH reading your fanfic :D it's so sweet, and cute! This next story you're working on seems interesting...continue it!
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: phoenixeye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 07:38 CST
Comment/Review:
poor yami. he is really lucky that he has yugi. i hope yamis father dyes a painful death. *evil thoughts of tormentoring people* aa good as the other ones. ^^
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: phoenixeye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 07:10 CST
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yami does really have a sad life. i do feel sorry for him. sometimes i ask myself why. it is no matter where i go, i always make the same mistake. but this isn't of improtence for your storry. anyway a good chapter, also it made my heart cry.
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Title: dracula
Reviewed By: phoenixeye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 07:41 CST
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he man. it's really a cool idea to let yami have a diary. reminds me of Bram Stokers Dracula. ^^ what shall i say? as good as the others. and i like your view of tea. ^___^
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Title: like your teachers
Reviewed By: phoenixeye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 07:31 CST
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he man. i never thought i would be this quick to read another chapters of yours, cause i'm sometimes really lazy. ^^' now to your story. the teachers in your story are great. i really like them. and what i have forgget to tell you in my last review, it is really nice to r4ead a story were not yugi is the one who is beaten by his father/stepfather. if i can choose, i would like to read, when in egypt. i reallly like egypt. ^^ see you next chapter.
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Title: nice beginning
Reviewed By: phoenixeye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 07:21 CST
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he you. thank you for your comment to my story. never exspected to get one. ^^ now to your story. it is really a good beginning. you have a good style of writing and discribing things. i really like this. i will need some time to read the next chapter. i can't go as often in teh internet as i want. the next chapter of my story will come soon. phoenixeye P.S. i'm not good at grammar. ^^'
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 11:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I think I like the first one the best. Ireally like the sounds of it.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 05:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That's it..Its over...wow. Ok that ending sucked. Over all the story was gret just really bad ending.
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Title: OO!!!!
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do I never knew...Untill now, I like agesty ficcies with yaoi or shonnen ai (ha, typical me! :P) as long as they have a happy ending!!! Keep on writing!!! *Is waving banner that says GO YGO CUPID!!!* YAAAY!!! ^-^ Yup, I got my banners back!!! Hehe, I finnaly found them. (If you want to know what im talking about if you even care, go to the reveiws in realizing love and you'll find out)
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Title: (I just noticed)
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone's reveiws are serious and mine are all goofy, weird and hyper... O.o I also spend a loooong time on one review... I'm to hyper, LOL! (at least this reveiw is shorter) :P Ciao
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Title: Waaiiit
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D&L: Waaaiit... YY/Y:??? D&L: I'M STILL HYPER!!! :P LOL!!! HEHE!!! X) Yugi: Okaaay... O.o Yami: Still!? I thought I took all of your sugar away... -.-;;; D&L: OR DID YOU!!!??? MWAHAHA!!!! I WI- *WACK* X.x Yami: *Is holding something behind his back* Yugi: Yaaamiii... >.< Yami: What? She was freaking me out! I HAD to do something! Yugi: -.-;;;;;;;;;; Um, okay... D&L will be un availible for a while... Yami: *under breath* And I have to hide her suger in a better place... >.< D&L: *suddenly gets up* HI!!! WHAT HAPPENE- Yugi: *screams and grabs the rather large piece of wood behind Yami's back and wacks D&L on the head* O.O Yami: O.o D&L: X.X Yugi: *blushes from embarassment and throws the wood to the side* Um, sorry? Yami: -.-;;; Well, since D&L is knocked out again, we'll have to say it- YY/Y: R&R PEOPLE, AND NO FLAMES! Yugi: Or else D&L will go CRAZY, and trust me, you don't want that to happen...
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M SOOOOO SORRY! I'VE BEEN BUSY AND STUFF! I'm at chappie 12 now... Sorry... I've been SO busy! Your ficcie is going GREAT! ^-^ I LOVE IT!!! This fic is just as good as Realizing Love or better!!! Wow, you got a lot of reveiwers! YAAAY! GO YOU!!! ^___^!!! I'm still the same hyper, crazy, person you used to know in realizing love reveiws, yuppies! ^-^ Hehe. I still haven't done my own ficcie, but I will one day. Hope you had a AWESOME Thanksgiving! I will try to move my lazy butt and reveiw more, LOL! ^.^;;;; COME ON PEEPS, R&R PLEASE!!! NO FLAMIES OR ELSE I'LL USE THEM TO MAKE S'MORES AND SHARE THEM WITH EVERYONE 'CEPT YOU!!! MWAHAHA! I know, I'm cruel. >3 AND HYPER!! WEEEE!!! It's soooooo cute how Yugi-chan and Yami-chan look out for each other and stuffs! It's so kawaii! *giggles* I saw the 4rth HP movie too! Trust me people, IT ROCKS, but sum parts are freaky or sad, but trust me, you GOTTA see it!!! ^-^ Ciao!
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Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 11:48 CST
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STILL GOOD! I still can't believe how hooked I am being to this story! Anywho I vote the the When in Egypt fic! They both sounded so good but I thing When in Egypt would be best! Keep the fic going good!
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Title: Don't know
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know which one of your two to decided or vote for. They both sound like good stories. Well anyways this story is good and I can't see how it ends. Please keep up the good work and update when you can.
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