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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 18:58 CST
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this is a great story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 15:26 CDT
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this is a great story, i hope you update it soon
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Reviewed By: deadlycrimson_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 11:09 CDT
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Luv ur story keep writing ok?
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story, and i think its great. Please Please update. and just so you know did you intentionaly leave out the part that Youko is Shippo's son, or did you just forget to write it. So any way update, update, update?
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story's going pretty well. I'm still reading, but am looking forward to the next update. My only suggestion would be proof reading and to put your notes and definitions at the beginning or end of each chapter. It interrupts the flow of the story to have the translation* of a word in parenthesis right next to it. For that, you can just use the English version. *Anata no onama e wa = Your name?
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaahhhh!! Kagome, poor Kagome (you know, I thought you meant Shiori the Bat hanyou at first then I read it again and was like OH! Duh - kit you meant Jinenji!! Haha lol) ANYWAY!! Thi Kit LOVES threesome so update soon, kay!! Don't leave Kagz dead! See You next chater
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 03:35 CST
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Wow Isn't Kagome both luck and unlucky to have so meny guys love her......the only problem I can see if meny guy love ya is if ya love them too ya know....How two people could fall in love (three if you count Koga) it a single day is beyond me....Know it would be so funny if Kagome didn't even end up with any of them....hehe....but I don't want that to happen, I realy don't, I want Inuyasha and Kagome to be together he realy loves her and she realy loves him, if it weren't for thoughs other guys confussing her feelings she could be happy with just Inuyasha right now (well maybe Koga would be a nucense still cause Kagome never realy like him as more then a friend). I hope you update befor I can't handle reading it, I'm serious I sometimes stop reading a fic cause I can't bear to see how it will turn out....XD.........please up date soon............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 12:53 CDT
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^^ I can't wait till the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 03:08 CDT
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Nice to see a new chapter for this. Who is the nephew Kagome referred to? You gotta love Kouga!And Kagome's three suitors aren't the ONLY ones in for a long night -- the rest of us will be shifting about impatiently, waiting to see what happens next. LOL!! I like Inu's reaction to the realization that he has real competition. I can't wait to read some of the talks I see coming between the guys. Glad Sango was supportive of Kagome's feelings, though. I hope you get some more written soon!
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 21:35 CDT
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Yet another good story, started and abandoned. What a shame. It would have been nice to see how it continued.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read how every gets along and if they finally slay Naraku.
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww I feel so sorry for Yusuke can't you make this an Inuyasha/Kagome/Hiei/Yusuke pairing? It could be a little difficult but I'm sure you could do it.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 17:44 CST
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YAAAAAAAY *huggle* You updated! Although it was extreamly short you still did. Now alls we need is a longer chappy and a quick update *nods*
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 18:38 CST
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i love the new chapter!!!!! i'm kinda surprised how this is all playing out, but its wsome all that same. ^.^ please update soon!!!!!
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Title: When Times Collide
Reviewed By: Aymia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. Ooooh, Shippou-chan is sooo cute. Update soon. Tai
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, very unique. adn also its an Inu and Kag paring too. i dont think i have seen one with an YH/IY crossover. and a 4some. agian very unique and cute.
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Title: When Times Collide
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update a.s.a.p!!! I don't care what's the pairing, as long as there's Hiei/Kagome lemons! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god you have to update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!I love how this is going,but what will the final pairing for Kagome be?I just love stories that leave you wondering what will happen next.So Please update soon,and to tell you I like both Kag/Inu,and Kag/Hiei pairings that's why I can't wait for you to update the story.So hurry up and get the next chapter(s) in as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 01:52 CDT
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Yay! I was so happy to see a new chapter! What great potential for screwing everything up timelinewise -- can't wait to see what you do with this. Though it's very sad for Kagome to have 3 very worthy suitors, since it seems 2 of them will end up losing out. I'm always in Hiei's corner! (But would feel especially sorry for Inu with all their history -- oh well! I would get over it.) Keep up the good work!
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Title: When Time Collide; Chapter 5
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love it! Uh oh! Kagome's in trouble! Hehe! PLEASE update! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!! I'll be waiting! Oh, and don't forget any Hiei/Kagome lemons/moments!!! Gods, I hate Keiko and Kikyo! Please update!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Hiei, Inuyasha, and Yusuke handle the fate that they all want to be with Kagome and that they will have to share her and how Kurama feels about having three grandpas instead of one.
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 02:23 CDT
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wow this should be intersting....
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 20:29 CDT
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Great so far^^ Oh and before i forget, Bad! Youleft us and it felt like forever! Just for that you have to write another chapy asap=3
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Title: moonwicca
Reviewed By: staralinga moonwicca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting i hope inuyash makes his aperence soon
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Reviewed By: Onna Kenkaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 06:08 CDT
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For starters, I really do like this story. The idea of Youko as Kagome's 'grandson' tickled me, and I enjoy the three - or will it be four with yusuke, lol? - pair matchup. My only recommendation to you is this. I've read a lot of Yu Yu Hakusho, and Keiko was willing to die for Yusuke. If you're going to split the two of them up - and it looks like you are - it will make your fic better if you can give a good reason for the sudden nastiness and jealously on Keiko's part. Under a spell? Did something hurt her? Does she view Yusuke as a sibling? Etc. Please don't take this as a flame, I truly mean it only as constructive criticism. I look forward to more of this fiction as soon as you write it!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:38 CDT
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OMFG O.O This is neat -^.^- Plz update asap
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 15:27 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: When Times Collide
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like these chapters, please update as soon as possible! Hiei/Kagome lemons all the way! LOlz! Please update soooon!
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 17:40 CDT
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Dont get me wrong but a threesome with inuyasha? iwouldnt think he would share, especially if it comes to kagome. Oh well its your story, please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. : )
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