| "When Times Collide" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, very unique. adn also its an Inu and Kag paring too. i dont think i have seen one with an YH/IY crossover. and a 4some. agian very unique and cute.
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Title: When Times Collide
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update a.s.a.p!!! I don't care what's the pairing, as long as there's Hiei/Kagome lemons! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god you have to update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!I love how this is going,but what will the final pairing for Kagome be?I just love stories that leave you wondering what will happen next.So Please update soon,and to tell you I like both Kag/Inu,and Kag/Hiei pairings that's why I can't wait for you to update the story.So hurry up and get the next chapter(s) in as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 01:52 CDT
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Yay! I was so happy to see a new chapter! What great potential for screwing everything up timelinewise -- can't wait to see what you do with this. Though it's very sad for Kagome to have 3 very worthy suitors, since it seems 2 of them will end up losing out. I'm always in Hiei's corner! (But would feel especially sorry for Inu with all their history -- oh well! I would get over it.) Keep up the good work!
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Title: When Time Collide; Chapter 5
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love it! Uh oh! Kagome's in trouble! Hehe! PLEASE update! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!! I'll be waiting! Oh, and don't forget any Hiei/Kagome lemons/moments!!! Gods, I hate Keiko and Kikyo! Please update!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Hiei, Inuyasha, and Yusuke handle the fate that they all want to be with Kagome and that they will have to share her and how Kurama feels about having three grandpas instead of one.
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 02:23 CDT
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wow this should be intersting....
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great so far^^ Oh and before i forget, Bad! Youleft us and it felt like forever! Just for that you have to write another chapy asap=3
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Title: moonwicca
Reviewed By: staralinga moonwicca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting i hope inuyash makes his aperence soon
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Reviewed By: Onna Kenkaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 06:08 CDT
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For starters, I really do like this story. The idea of Youko as Kagome's 'grandson' tickled me, and I enjoy the three - or will it be four with yusuke, lol? - pair matchup. My only recommendation to you is this. I've read a lot of Yu Yu Hakusho, and Keiko was willing to die for Yusuke. If you're going to split the two of them up - and it looks like you are - it will make your fic better if you can give a good reason for the sudden nastiness and jealously on Keiko's part. Under a spell? Did something hurt her? Does she view Yusuke as a sibling? Etc. Please don't take this as a flame, I truly mean it only as constructive criticism. I look forward to more of this fiction as soon as you write it!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:38 CDT
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OMFG O.O This is neat -^.^- Plz update asap
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 15:27 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: When Times Collide
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like these chapters, please update as soon as possible! Hiei/Kagome lemons all the way! LOlz! Please update soooon!
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 17:40 CDT
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Dont get me wrong but a threesome with inuyasha? iwouldnt think he would share, especially if it comes to kagome. Oh well its your story, please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. : )
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