| "A Ripple in Time" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. There was one thing that caught my eye when it came to the topic of Trunks. Cell mentioned him during the fight but when he was brought up again to the others they didn't know what the hell he was talking about. What happened there? And as far as the story is concerned you did a really nice job but I don't know how you can say it's the end when it looks like it's just beginning. Please write the sequel.
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Reviewed By: LittleMica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THIS STORY, GIVE US SEQUEL!!!
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Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 00:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah almost forgot oviously her father will be saiyan but who will it be!!Can't wait to see!
Side Note;As such to the fact that males can't have children it is adapted that saiyan females are very rare being as such saiyan males developed the ability to become pregnate so if incorperating this into the story you could have Vegeta or Kakkarot/Jun have a baby just for them!
Only if you want to of course.It was just an idea
Ja n'e |
Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is highly unapprciated! this story is very well written! I love it V/K pairings there so cute together! |
Reviewed By: Goddess_of_the_Earth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZ DO MORE!!! THIS IS SUCH A GOOOD STORY...PLZZZZ DON'T LEAVE IT THERE!!!*dose big puppy-dog eyes* |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yaaaaay! I finally tracked this story down! Simply put, this is the best self-insertion AU ever. And I normally hate self-insertion stories... can't seem to bring myself to care about a non-established character. But this one's different. The only problem I have is that there's a tad too much OOC-silliness, patricularly on Vegita's part... I mean, hiding behind Goku from Chichi brandishing a frying pan? o.0 Well, it's a minor quibble. LOVE the back-to-original-body twist, highly devious and original. Keep writing, keep writing... oh, and if you get a boost from reviews, wait till you see the present I have for you.... mua-ha-ha-ha! |
Reviewed By: Eleclya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooooo good. You must continue now, coz I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Keep writin away |
Reviewed By: Rogue13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been sooo long. I have loved this story since you first posted it. I'm so glad that you are still updating it! Keep going! PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: June 16, 2002 17:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh i need more! once again im loving this fic MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:)Mizu:p |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: May 09, 2002 06:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
*tears water up in eyes* you *sniff*stoped *sniff* i wana read morrrrrrrrrrre*crying like Usagi*
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2002 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. oh my god my guts killing me. so who's next on the crazy list? does Launch come and pull a miss 'goody-two-shoes' act in her blond self and then evil bitch in her blue-haired self???? huh huh is she even in this fic? *ok im going nuts waiting
bonceing off the walls,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
AH! so what is ChiCHi going to do??HUH? I WANT TO KNOW! *starts to cry* |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou_Sedai (i'm not logged in) On: February 09, 2002 09:08 CST
Comment/Review:
AH! that was cute!!!!! okay hehe, i can't wait till you get the next chapter out! |
Reviewed By: AngelKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2002 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ekk!!!!! OH. MY. GOD.!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...........how can u just leave it there???? THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ...............please!!!! I just love it! You are SO going on favorites list!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Akoya On: February 03, 2002 11:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm impressed, this is really a different way of doing an overused idea and it's really, really cool. More!! |
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