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Reviewed By: Mihoshie On: November 07, 2005 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A lot better than some of the ones i've read on ff.net. it was very interesting to find Sesshoumaru thrown into the mix. that gives the story more depth. i like so far. i'm not good at criticism, but i've read enough fics to know what i like to expect in one. yours is one of my favorites. hehe.
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: November 07, 2005 16:21 CST
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wew! *wipes of sweat* that first cahpter was looonnggg! but im glad you wrote it onto the next one and i agree with you Inuyasha is like a teenage guy but like noone shows it but the stories are so much better when he doesn't act like he's in Kagome's words at the start of the series less mature than Souta for heaven sake. Jeez! seriously i luv stories like this and im gonna read some more. Ba-Bye!^_^
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Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! It's awesome that you can find such great stories quite by accident! Ahem, anyways! I love how you're making Kouga evil in this one, because it's what would happen! There are so many out there that sugarcoat rivalries. Bravo! You're also very brave to take someone such as Sango OOC...Its great, mind you, but I'm sure someone will catch on how weird she's acting for herself. It may be just me...Anyways! Love your fic, can't wait for the next chapter! -Loke
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Reviewed By: AvatarNeko On: November 07, 2005 12:25 CST
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Oooh the plot thickens! You update so fast! Thank you soooo much! I appreaciate it greately. Poor Kouga, cant wait to see whats in store for him. You are doing great!
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Title: aaah cliffy!
Reviewed By: AvatarNeko On: November 06, 2005 23:40 CST
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Oooh nooo cliffy! And with Sesshy in it too! *Patiently waits for next chapter* Gambatte!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 15:11 CST
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omg! its lord sesshykins! update update update!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: blackenedheartkagome On: November 06, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was great! I don't think I've had a good story that included Inuyasha in it for quite some time. But what's with Sesshomaru? Why is he protecting Kagome all of a sudden? Is it because he's family to her now and it's tradition to protect a siblings mate? That's really good! blackenedheartkagome
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Reviewed By: Akihana nsi On: November 06, 2005 13:45 CST
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You know, you can put lemon stuff on mediaminer. And update soon so we know what is going with Sesshy.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: kytenluvinu2 On: November 06, 2005 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I just say you and another writing are what made me pursuit my own fan fic Cahpter four had my heart pounding and I love cliffhangers it exercises the imagination that one was frickin' awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Deadly Crimson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 12:14 CST
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you should have given more ''details'' about their love making!!! that would hav been fun. Still, I loved the chapter to death. Next thing. SESSHOUMARU?! what the crap?! a well. please update as soon as possible! waaaaaaaaaaaa
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Reviewed By: yeah shorty On: November 06, 2005 06:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i find this story very amusing and also romantic,please write more.
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!! IT'S AWESOME!!!!! SO PWEESE UPDATE ASAP!
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!! IT'S AWESOME!!!!! SO PWEESE UPDATE ASAP!
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Title: Great fic!
Reviewed By: AvatarNeko On: November 05, 2005 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic as well! Keep up the great work. I love the character development. Aah evil cliffhanger! Evil! ^_^
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Title: Coming of Age
Reviewed By: Shiira On: November 05, 2005 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!! I GAVE EVERYTHING A 10!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING AND UPDATE!:)
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