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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 07:41 CST
Comment/Review:
ok uh I just read the last TWO chapters and...ok that was an unexpected twist, I thought for sure that this would be s/k??? or is it really going to be i/k? grr confusing!! sess and kag were becoming a cute couple!!!! kags being maybe part demon???? humph..ok... it's your story and it's been really interesting so far so I'll see what happens next?? soon!! please!!!!?
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Title: MHM!!!!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKay i like the plot u got going, and i love the whole mythological creature setting u have going. This stories getting real good , keep writing , and do the eyes belong to Rin?
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Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 06:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make it Sesshomaru and kagome i love that kind of story and i'm sure alot of other pepole do to.but make it hard for her to make up her mind.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great!!! Please update soon this fic is awsome!! he he oh and just a suggestion (honestly)it would be awsome if kags really did turn into a cat demon!!!! she is part spirit too isnt she though?! cool! i havent read ny fics b/4 that used demons for the mystical creatures! much less the idea of spirits, thats a really different idea!!! so keep UPDATING PLEASE!!!! ITS GREAT!!!
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Title: ehhh
Reviewed By: MaNyWaTeRs [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good start, but you need to space out your paragraphs and make them more...deatailed.
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Title: MY EYES ARE BLEEDING!
Reviewed By: Demetz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 16:35 CST
Comment/Review:
For the love of God, make better use of the paragraph!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR ITS REALLY INTERESTING!!! ^_^
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