| "Nights of Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 02:48 CST
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Very nicely done. Interesting twist at the end... Kagome calling out the ghost's name instead. Poor Inuyasha... I really enjoyed the little verbal spat between them and how Inuyasha let it slip that he smelled and heard her - very demonstrative of his explosive temper. Good story - unique plotline, and you've managed to keep them in character despite the unusual setting and circumstances. And of course, I enjoy the limes - more than if you had written an actual lemon. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 21:10 CST
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GUH!!! OOOPS!!! Too bad for Inuyasha! Poopy. Continue soon!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Kagome calling out the name of some strange ghost... BURN! This story kind of reminds me of a good chunk of the Angel episode Waiting In The Wings. So you've got that going for you, which is nice. I think Angel summed it up pretty well in that episode: "I've been possessed by the ghosts of old lovers before. It never ends well."
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 03:08 CST
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nice story, and yeah i agree with you, you are a horrible horrible person. not be to be offensive but you're an ass too -.-. leaving stories on cliffhangers so much lol.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 23:34 CST
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I really like the story UPDATE SOON PLEASE I cant wait to find out where Yumikos spirit is. Have a happy New Year!!! ;D
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaxkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 19:44 CST
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Great chappie! Loved it! Oh by the way, I really think you should explain about the miko looking servent and the ghosts' past. By the way next time you do a lemon/lime, please warn me in the chapter, I don't really think I should read it. But, the rest is really wonderful. Ta-di-ta!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 18:23 CST
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That was good! Only technically the first chapter wasn't a lemon, it was just a lime. Kagome's body wasn't penentrated by Inuyasha's... Uh... ANYWAY. Good, good, job! I do look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Soon! This story was great!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 20:44 CST
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You should really update it was really good and I love it so far.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 13:12 CST
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lOVED IT REALLY GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Chloei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I hope you will update soon. I love the plot too, funny
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I swear you write beautifully and this plot is quite origial! *claps* I really want to know what Inuyasha's reaction is the next morning and if he remembers everything! So, please say you still have inspiration and update soon...please? I cannot wait to read another beautiful chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my... seems like inuyasha himself doesn't know what he did! but i have a sneaking suspicion of what a certain monk went and done. ^_^ great chapter, dear. pls update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue pls^^
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Title: weirdness!!
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 17:26 CST
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Write some more and let's see where it goes. I am curious(sp?) as to what happenned to Inuyasha to act this way... hmmm... Update please! ^_^
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