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Title: wow!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inyashafan2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i lykd this so much. i would hav never though of puttin harry potter and inuyasha together. harry draco and kagome together is hot. harry and draco making out and making love is jus super sexy(even though im a female im jus weird like that. then wen u add kagome n2 the mixed....wow i almost had an orgasim lol!!!!! i ws happy with ur threesome sence and ur harry and draco sence (so happy u added it ws really lookn 4 it). *sigh* i would hav loved 2 c sum more hot steamy sex but i loved da story anyways. once i startd i couldnt stop readn. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: NitaGIRL On: August 22, 2009 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...how can i put this? I REALLY LIKEDED IT! Not to mention the fact that mt two favorite characters from Harry Potter are in it! but um yeah....keep it goin!
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Reviewed By: Tsusokei On: August 20, 2009 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow Draco IS BI YAY BINESS smexy chapter keep it up and write more soon
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Reviewed By: Arfa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story it is creative and imaginative, it just just sucks you in and doesn't let go, (it's a pity that you don't update often -.-) but I'm really glad that you dint abandon your story, cant wait till you update. :DD keep up with your good work :DD
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: XD On: November 24, 2008 20:00 CST
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Interesting story and everything. Love it to bits but if there is something that needs to be revised here its the spelling and grammar D: It would be perfect once that issue is addressed
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: InuGuardian On: November 21, 2008 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the story, so don't let the rating numbers fool you. When I first found this story, I was so into it, and then got sad when no updates were made. I mean, really sad. I love Kags, and I LOVE Draco. I kinda like Harry, but he's a good guy, so I have to forgive him for that. To break down my scoring for you: Style, wonderful. Nothing to really improve on. Spelling and grammar....I'm a perfectionist when it comes to writing, and I blame that on my english teachers. It's not really so much that you just completely kill the word you're trying to spell, I think it's more that you use the wrong form of the word or add a letter that doesn't need to be there. I don't remember which chapter it was, instead of 'two' you used 'too'. And in one of the chapters you used the word 'plain' instead of 'plan' several times. Obviously that's not an error that can be found with spell check. I don't know if you're like me, but I revise while I write and I don't like to go back and read my own writing. Makes everything else seem like it's forced and rushed. Originality, wonderfully original. I can't think of any other story where there's a 'link' between them that they can read thoughts. I never got into any other HP/IY stories cuz they just don't flow very well. This one does. Enjoyment, very enjoyable. I can't wait until you update again. I would like to see maybe a, and I know this sounds weird, but a lemon between Harry and Draco, with Kagome kinda being a voyeur about it and watches them. She did say that seeing to guys kissing turns her on. Why not play into that? Especially since Draco(drools) and Harry already feel something for each other. I'd try to expand on their relationship more, as well as their relationship with Kagome. Just an idea.
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Reviewed By: UrusaiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 16:55 CDT
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I totally loooovvveeeee this fanfic!!!!!!!!!! by far one of my most favourite and i really can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!>_< i really hope that you can update as soon as possible...love the harry/kagome/draco pairing. keep up the excellent work!!
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Reviewed By: a On: June 02, 2008 19:25 CDT
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what is the name of that song? her training song?
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty On: December 08, 2007 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to tell you You are a very talented writer and that you have great skill to write a story like this and also handle everything else in your life I look forward to your continuation of this story.
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 22:50 CDT
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YAY! The LEMON! THE LEMON! Can't wait! This chapter was good! I'm glad that she finally has the Shikon back! Does that mean that Salizar can come out now? I'm also happy that Kagome and Inuyasha and Kagome have kissed and made up! This is such a good story! I love it sooo much! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: dieing to know On: August 03, 2007 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you want me to cry??? well if you do I gotta say congrats.... 'cause I am so cring my eyes out right now and I soooooooooooooo want to know what is gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!! so will you just hurry up and get off your lazy ass and keep writing the god damn story!!!! oh, and so far it is an awesome story. but you just gotta learn to use a spell checker once in a while. other than that keep up the good work!!!
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 19:20 CST
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This is a good fic. I also understnad the no updating take as long as you need. AND IF ANY BODY SAYS TO HURRY UP AND UPDATE, I WILL PERSONALLY RIP OFF YOUR HEAD, PUT IT ON A PIKE, AND STICK IS IN SOMEONE'S YARD! OR UP YOUR ASSHOLE! Which ever is more humilliating. *starts nodding head*
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 19:19 CST
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This is a good fic. I also understnad the no updating take as long as you need. AND IF ANY BODY SAYS TO HURRY UP AND UPDATE, I WILL PERSONALLY RIP OFF YOUR HEAD, PUT IT ON A PIKE, AND STICK IS IN SOMEONE'S YARD! OR UP YOUR ASSHOLE! Which ever is more humilliating. *starts nodding head*
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Reviewed By: inuyasha1234 On: January 20, 2007 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand you not updating, and I hope that you resolve your problems soon... not for the readers but for yourself and your family, I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story and hope that feel better soon. My best friend (and secret love) is also in her last year at high school and I know how tough it can be, so take your time and sort things out... I'll be waiting if you need anything, inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com... Love, Mari-chan
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Destiny Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the best Inuyasha/Harry Potter Crossover I have ever read!!!! Please Update Soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 18:48 CST
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Don't worry. Any faithful reader will wait! I know that I will! 'Cause this is a good sotry and I understand a bout family problems to the extreme. Update whenever you can!
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Reviewed By: blackrose80 On: January 10, 2007 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i liked it a lot!! it was really cute!!! so please update soon kay???? bye bye!!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 17:36 CST
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Ive read this story before and it ticks me off that you haven't reviewed since June. Please review soon. Arigato.
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Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good cross-over fic. I really enjoy it. You should update as soon as you can. I don't want to sound like a nag or a bitch but I think you should re-read your chapters before you post them up so that you woudl have less spelling misteaks and grammatical errors. Anyway, update soon, please!
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 23:37 CST
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i really luv this fanfic please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagomerocks241 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update really soon
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Title: In Your Mind
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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