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Title: Eck
Reviewed By: Ashtin On: November 08, 2005 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is just like everyone elses I am truly sorry but you need to re-read that and look at your spelling a grammer errors and the chapter were very very very short I read that whole thing In 5 minutes and other fanfics I take 5 minutes just to read a pharagraph and how did Inu-Yasha turn human without the whole jewel:( It wasnt very good from and expert writer.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 12:53 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good so far, but I would like more to go on before forming a formal opinion. But this shows lots of promise. I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon.
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Reviewed By: heartgirl9229 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I love your chapter and hope you continue. Poor InuYasha. This must be traumatizing!!!
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