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Reviewed By: Chinni On: July 14, 2006 14:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really nice. I liked that you didn't put in a full lemon...it's just too soon. They need to stay a little innocent, lol. But yes, very nice. I really like your style! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: hellsangel5891 On: July 14, 2006 14:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg yes they are a couple at last ^_^ i love this chapter is was really sweet and good.
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Reviewed By: Miaa_hiaa (nli) On: July 14, 2006 14:06 EDT
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yay! i checked my mail this morning and i was screaming "SAVVY'S UPDATED! WHOO HOO!!!!" XDD i'm such a dork i loved the chappie and the fluffly lime, LEMON!!!! LEMON!!!!!! ha ha XDDD i love yah hun =P have fun with the next chappie i look forward to it
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 14, 2006 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! You updated! I was waiting for this chapter to drop, and it was well worth the wait. You did a wonderful job with the lime to. It didn't feel rushed or anything and I liked that. I'm glad you took your time with this one, it showed in the chapter. Anywho...can't wait to see what's next!
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Title: soft
Reviewed By: halfdemonbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter. i like this chapter a little soft but it was good.
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Reviewed By: mojopp On: July 14, 2006 12:23 EDT
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THAT WAS AWESOME!!! especially how there wasn't any awkwardness after! GREAT! SUPER! SUPERB!!!
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Title: Awesome!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEE!!!YA did it, ya finally got em together...well, almost. But nice bit of citrus there, really nice. And excellent choice for music too. Crazy Bitch cracks me up some just from the lyrics, but I like it anyways. Loved Sango's and the other girls reaction to it all too. Now just have to see who comes in to just TRY and break it all up. Damn Koga and Kikyo anyways. You're REALLY keepin me on the edge of me seat here, ya know that? Lmao...then again, that's the whole point... :P Love the story. You're doin a damn fine job. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: duckgirl567 On: July 14, 2006 11:33 EDT
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Very nice, loved this chapter. I don't read lemons though, so it was short for me!
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan(nsi) On: July 14, 2006 11:32 EDT
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It was just perfect :) I can't wait to see what is going to be happening next now that our adorable couple is finally together! I'm so happy to see this chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Bridezilla1015(nsi) On: July 14, 2006 10:52 EDT
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Great chapter! So glad to see that they've gotten together! Does the little episode in the bedroom mean we're going to get a buildup to a lemon? Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(NSI) On: July 14, 2006 10:45 EDT
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ I'm GIDDY!!! :D :D :D :D You've made me quite the happy reader!! they're TOGETHER!! I"M SOOOOOO HAPPY!!!! ^_^ *huggles you* i squealed and grinned so hard during the club scene, when sango and everyone learned they were together. SO HAPPY!! YAYAYAYYAYAYA!!!! i loved it gurl!!!! keep tramping on! =P
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 10:41 EDT
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I am loving your story! I hope you update soon!!
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: Hollistergirl29 On: July 14, 2006 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They get better and better every time i read i love this chapter awww it's soooooo Cute inuyasha and kagome are together YaY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: Hollistergirl29 On: July 14, 2006 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They get better and better every time i read i love this chapter awww it's soooooo Cute inuyasha and kagome are together YaY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome-sama9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 21:53 EDT
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Are you going to finish this?? It is sooooo good... Fuck that, it is GREAT! Please hurry up.
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