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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: DarkEskara On: June 29, 2006 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Ochiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 17:11 EDT
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Aww... That was adorable, when Inu Yasha was describing what Kagome was to him. Great chapter, I can't wait to see what he expains to her!
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Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 28, 2006 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great band..From Autumn to Ashes. Sorry! Anyway, loved the Chapter!!! I'm very glad things are starting to well.. move along (more or less :D) Chapters just keep getting better and better, I can't wait until your next update!!! Good thing that Sango didn't exactly beat the shit out of InuYasha, he's just emotionally constipated(obviously)... but I won't get into one of those spiels.. I suppose I'm rambling now... well, Take it easy!!I await your next update!!
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Reviewed By: ShaylaBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-_-...u like torturing me dont u... I loved this chapter...everything about it... I cant even express how much i loved this chapter
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions(NSI) On: June 28, 2006 05:04 EDT
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But this was more. This... This was an internal burn created by the slightest brush of her hand, this was a floor littered with half finished verses because no words lived up to her. Where the rise and ebb of his heart rode on her smile, and his blackest desires of violence rested with whoever caused her tears, including himself. It was remembering home every time he looked into her eyes. It was arguments that ended in laughter, stupid pajamas, silky hair, and how the curve of her ankle led him into dreams, and if that wasn't complete insanity, what was? Kikyou had hurt him so much... Kagome could break him. -- I LOVED that passage! GORGEOUS!! please more soon! *squee*
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: June 28, 2006 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your story is the shit, peep!!! ^^ I can't believe I just said that... Anyhoo, I'm so freakin' hooked on this thing. You are a terrific writer, and you're doing a splendid job on this story. Please, please update soon!!! I give this story 2 thumbs up and a big toe! ^.^ ~moosegirl13
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 23:57 EDT
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I am LOVING (and i mean) ABSO-FUCKING-LUTLY LOOOOVE this saga!!!!!! I can't seem to get enough, its so drugging! I try to check once a day to see if you updated........yeah Im hooked! Sad huh? Lol! This definantly ranks in my top five of favorite fanfics. Motto Beni- means 'UBER goooood' in Italian. I have actually started reading your chaps when you were around chapter 18 but I haven't reviewed till now. Im SO SO SO sorry for that but life is hectic these days with my dancing. I always write reviews for chaps Ive read but lately its been hard to fit in time to even read fics. So I hope you will forgive me of my lateness and take this review and count it for all 22 chaps. Again Im really sorry but you'll be hearing my reviews from now on. Like I said............Im SOOOOO ADDICTED TO SAVVY!!!!! Though its bitter torture with this cliffy........too painful, you need to write! lol. read ya later! You rock this f-ing world! ^_^
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Title: i think...
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 19:10 EDT
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i'd like to kill you for that ending. i really would. please update soon... i dont think i'm going to last... oh god... oh, and great choice of bands for the chapter. they all fucking rock.
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: June 27, 2006 16:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Another wonderful chapter!
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan(nsi) On: June 27, 2006 15:16 EDT
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*pout* So I really wanted them to kiss for new years but I'm ridiculously excited for where the next chapter is going to go! I LOVED Sango and Inuyasha's talk by the way, their relationship is really something amazing and I think you did such a great job on that scene. Hope you can update soon! Thanks for another great chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 27, 2006 12:43 EDT
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An ok chapter ends with you thinking, oh...ok. A good chapter ends with you thinking, Cool, I wonder when the next one is going to be avaliable. A great chapter ends with you cursing the computer because you know that the damn thing is hiding the rest of the chapter from you. This was a great chapter. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a cruel person, I am dying inside. That is a cold way to stop the chapter. But I guess the wait makes the pay out all the more sweet. This is really a great story. I just had to tell you that, so well written and great atmosphere (sorry I always massacre that word) but no other phrase fits. I can not wait for the next chapter, so for my sanity (which is something that is often called into question) I hope you get a chance to update soon. So until then good luck and I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 01:34 EDT
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YOU BIG FAT MEANY!!! j/k *lol*. But that was cruel with the cliff hanger and all. Glad I added u to my favorites list, so I got the email as soon as you posted. Great chapter though. I'm still trying to wrap my mind around when they do get together; 4th of July will have nothing on them. *lol* Can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: howlinatowel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 01:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story! cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: June 27, 2006 01:05 EDT
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He admitted it he loves Kagome.Sango should be a detective she can make anyone plead guilty. Abd she's right everyone deserves happiness.^@^
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