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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: June 03, 2006 10:36 EDT
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OMG IS INU THAT STUPID?!?! I cant believe he was soooo bull headed. this is probably my most favorite chapter and the story is in the top five on my favorites list. Im glad Kagome didnt get hurt when kouga tried 2 break in. BUT I STILL CANT BELIEVE INU COULD BE SOOO BLONDE!!!(no offense 2 blondes i am 1.) Well bye 4 now. ~smacks Inuyasha upside the head as i walk away.~
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 03, 2006 09:40 EDT
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Wait? WHAT? No! Nooooonononono! BAKA NO INU! BAKA BAKA! *thumps him* I can't believe he did that! I can't believe that happened! This chapter had me completely drawn in from start to finish! This had to be my most favorite chapter so far but wtf?! What was he thinking?! Zomg! I wanna kick his ass! What a fucking idiot! Goddess, I can't believe him! BAKA INU!
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Reviewed By: U.C. On: June 03, 2006 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an updating machine my friend! Not that I'm complaining since I'm completely hooked on this story! I also went back and read some of your other stuff. It's all very good. I was especially impressed with your characterization. I know I said this before, but there really are so many people who just do whatever and it kind of kills some of the original greatness of the series. I also like what you're doing with Kikyo in this. She's sick, she cant help it that she's such a jerk because she's so strung out. I thought that was very creative. Anyways, looking forward to read whats going to happen next. UC
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Title: OMGOSH!
Reviewed By: Inu4me On: June 02, 2006 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"He looked reluctant to reply. "I've gotta take you home." "Why? What happened?" He grimaced. "I think Kikyou's in trouble." " OMGOSH! You evil person! lol, Its reallllllyyy Good You NEED to update!~
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: vegetasgirl06 On: June 02, 2006 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was off the hook. i loved the plot and how you wrote it. in closing all i want to say is that you are ver very mean for that cliffhanger. but it was still AWSOME!!!
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Title: OMG!!!(total blondeness)
Reviewed By: Inugurl27k [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 19:29 EDT
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that was awsome! you took my love of a/u fics to a whole new level!!! i give you love and praise and love!!! i cant wait for the next update, and you will definatly hear from me again! JA!!!
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Title: GOoood
Reviewed By: HollisterGirl29 On: June 02, 2006 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it Update Soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 16:08 EDT
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I'm sorry to hear that you're sick. But I liked this chapter, and the ending SUCKED! BAD CLIFFIES! I was so fustrated with it, that I drew you a picture to tell you to update soon! (I read it right before I went to school, so instead of studying for my finals, I drew you a picture ^^;;) Don't worry, I was terriably bored. Heres the link ^^ http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a140/Rinlover/scan0001.jpg Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chapter's great, I love it! Kouga and Kikyo should hookup, maybe those 2 mental fits will kill each other and leave everyone in peace. (HAHAHAHAHAHA)~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: haleos18 On: June 02, 2006 14:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about your painful/itchy situation. hope you'll keep up the amazing chappies. *giant hug*
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: June 02, 2006 12:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. You actually took time with it and the plot is really good. Keep it up!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again, I just love this chapter. If Kikyou is in trouble let her stay in trouble.Hey, maybe Kouga got to her to get to Inuyasha what do you think? Can't wait till the next update. Reviews note: For the pitty party what should I bring ice cream or beer or pizza with everything? and the name of the song is "One Dead Bitch" (insert evil laughter here) Get well soon
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Reviewed By: U.C. On: June 02, 2006 09:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! Not a super original plot, but you've really made it stand out. I love the characterization of Inuyasha. It's so true to his real character, It seems like too many people try to change him in AU's, but yours are dead on. Cant wait for the next chapter. UC
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Reviewed By: serendith_ On: June 02, 2006 07:03 EDT
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I am sorry to hear about all your troubles! I have to say that it didn't affect your writing though because that was a fantastic chapter!
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNIT IGNORE KIKYOU LET HER DIE OR SOMETHING FUCKING PAIN IN THE ASS :breaths: i am not a kikyou fan could you guess? lol ^^; (looks innocent) and awwwwwwwwwwww he wrote her a song that was so cute, did you right that the lyrics were really good, i'd google it to check but i'm feeling lazy at 6am lol
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