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| "listen to your heart" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama On: November 02, 2006 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there i luv yur story!!!pairing: kag/sess/hiei, san/mir. deaths: inu, nar, kikyo, keiko. oooo an please add me in da story! i want me 2 look like dis if u add me: black shoulder length hair, eyes change color w/ moods, fairly tallk, thin, OPTIONAL: mabye i could b a kitsune fire demon in descise, if so then in my demon form i would look like dis: waist long fire red hair w/ black streaks, slightly shorter, and mood changing eyes. u don't have 2 add me if u don't wanna but i would apreciate it. if u did. if by chance ya do i would like 2 be called Sayuri in da story. and just incase you dan't like some of my description u can change it.as for da pairing dis is who i want me/hiei /// me/kur /// me/oc. this is who i wanna b paired w/ if hiei's taken go to da next option (kur) and if all else fails pair me wit an oc of ur chosing. ^.^ and this is only if u wanna put me in da story, if not i completly understand. again totally AWSOME fic plz plz plz plz plz p.l.z. write moooooooooorrrrrrrrrrre!!!! i luf it!!!!^.^
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: angel1245 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I think kagome and hiei are a good coupel but who the hell voted nar/kag is crazy that is the worst coupel ever not in a millon years but I do like the fic up date soon ok please,please oh andplease,please,please,please,please,please ,please ,please,please,please do not make it a kag/nar fic please,please oh and what is up with the option on who songo goes with I mean she is marring mirouku isn't she and good choice on killing kikyou I love that you said you are going to kill that whoreso I think this fic is soon going to be great.
| Title: voting
Reviewed By: kagsinred [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think the pairrings should be: kagome/kurama/youko, sango/miroku, rin/kohaku, ayame/kouge, kagura/jin, yuhina/kuwabara, koenma/botan, shizuru/sesshomaru, and yusuke/kanna but only if kanna is even in this story and also shippo/southern and to die: keiko, kikyou, naraku, and inuyasha
| Reviewed By: Aqua Aneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would say either Kagome/Kurama, Kagome/Sesshomaru, or both of them with Kagome. I would also like to vote for Kagome/Hiei. I vote that Kikyo(Obviously, I HATE the dead, heartless clay pot!), Inuyasha, and Naraku die. I think you should get rid of most of the others but they don't have to die. Besides if Keiko died Yusuke would go through an 'Oh no I could have saved her! I've lost the woman I loved!' thing going on. Instead you should have Keiko cheat on Yusuke with someone (maybe Kuwabara) and they both leave after getting caught.
| Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: fluffyschick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm good story a little short but its short i vote for a kag/hiei/kur,kill inu.,kik.,naraku, sango/miroku yus./keiko oh and maybe a botan/koemme please write more and thank you
| Title: Voting!!
Reviewed By: darkangel729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoy Kag/Hiei stories so...yeah! how can you vote for pairings for sango when she's getting married to miroku? KIKYO DIES!!! SO DOES NARAKU!!! p.s. sorry for the hiperness. i just had caffiene.
| Reviewed By: Yuki The Lonely Hanyou Pup [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so good i'm ytorn between Kag/sess and Kag/kur death to keiko kikyo inuyasha kuwabara and Botan
| Reviewed By: SilentTearsofFeatheredWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 02:15 CST
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Kag Hiei, or Sess/Kag/Hiei. Nice fic!
| Reviewed By: neosailorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 23:07 CST
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I would like to see this being a Kag/sess/hiei fic. I would also like to see all those that you mentioned dei.
| Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 16:41 CST
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Kag/Hiei Kag/Hiei Kag/Hiei!!! I love that pairing!!!! :) Also Sango and Kurama (she needs a nice guy!!) I really like your story and hope you get better soon!!! Everyone I know has ethier a cold or flu...it stinks. Also, would it be ok if I were an oc? I have light brown hair; Green eyes; Slightly tanned skin; I work out alot; and usually wear black baggy pants and a white shirt or tank top; I have two pericings in each ear and I'm a punk....yea thats about it. Also if Yusuke doesn't get paired with anyone, I would like to be paired with him....only if he doesn't get paired with anyone though. Thxx. Keep writing, can't wait till next chapter!! :)
| Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 20:25 CST
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nd for the people who should die... everyone except for maby botan, waht you could do is hve her have a relationship with uruma and hve her die, then have that little red haired girl take her place kuruma have a bit of a break down
| Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 20:22 CST
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I lvoe it, but to tell ou the truth, im not trying to seem rude, bu i never think it works out to well when you take sango and miroku t the future, theres just too many people in my opnioin, but i still love it..lol
| Reviewed By: Great_Oz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 13:13 CST
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I vote for Kagome/Kurone or Kagome/Naraku(we all know he he has a good heart don't we ;P) and to die: Keiko (don't like her either), Inuyasha and Botan.
| Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 16:26 CST
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I vote for H/k please!This rocks.. woooo!
| Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 15:27 CST
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Kagome/Kurama|Youko Keiko/Yusuke Kagura/Jin Touya/Oc Oc/Hiei Yukina/Kuwabara Ayame/Kouga Koenma/Botan or Inuyasha/Botan Rin/Kohaku Shizuru/Sesshoumaru To die- Kikyo Naraku
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