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| "Daria: College Pains" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: James the Lesser [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 21:07 CST
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I agree that the thing with Brittany was probably an act, mostly. I sent a PM to you before but no idea if it got through. Anyways, with Brit, in several episodes she did show some brains, but then looked at Kevin or the other cheerleaders and went back to being a ditz. And being crass is no problem if it's true, right? And Jodie was the Valedictorian of Lawndale High so she was really smart. No prblem on the review being all over the place it is a review and you say more then "gr8 job!" With Tony, he will play a bigger part later, for good or bad not sure. Although he is a bit of self insertion since I pretty much do the same thing when around people. Except for a couple of people I act happy happy joy joy hyper lets go get em. Found it cuts down on the getting into fights, beatings, and more options when you're really bored and can't write. Where does your thought about Lindsey and Skaz go? I'd like to hear. I know where it goes in my mind but always happy to hear from others. I love talking to my readers on FF. Net and hear and almost always respond by either review or PM. Unless they do the "Gr8 Story! PCTS" since they may or may not have read the story just posting to post.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:52 CST
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Neh, good to know, and even better to see a few chapters released quickly, that I am thankful for. One thing I love, Andrea and Jane have a decent relationship, though I am worried that maybe Jane does have feelings for Daria (I mean, really, Daria is the dark, sarcastic, incredible sharp wit I like in a woman, not to mention a hard exterior with a soft side buried under several feet of steel shell). Still,Daria is weirded out by Tony, but his personality does seem, well, fractured. Still, a decent guy, but one to be wary of as well. Still, Daria is interesting as hell, as always, and Lindsay isn't a total airhead (truth is, neither was Britnay, I think most of how she acted was because she wanted her family's approval, and money too). Actually, that's a good point, what about Brittnay? I think her going REAL goth would be interesting (I mean, not the makeup,and easy to wear clothes, like black pants and dark tops, would appeal to her, since Brittnay's clothes, while those of a cheerleader, are practical, and easy to take advantage of when it comes to sex, practically speaking. (I know it's crass, but very true to Brittnay's character, very strong sex drive). Still, really what it comes down to is that the people at Lawndale were pretty smart (Jodie had her own thing going, and so did Brittnay, I think she jsut acted the way she did because it got her what she wanted and needed, less attention on her becuase she's viewed as a flake, getting laid on a regular basis by a decently stacked guy, and the money to do what she wants). Besides, she did get into college, enough said). Still, Skaz and Lindsay, where is that goign exactly? A thought does come to mind on that. ANd I know this review is all over the place, but frankly, I do think Brittnay was smarter than let on (though it was either a VERY skilled act, or she really had no experience thinking for herself; if the latter was the case, college is a time for her to make her choices). Anyway, that's about it, sometime I'd like to see a brittnay that fun, interesting, and tones down her voice (GOD I hated the voice for her in the series, it hurts my BRAIN!!!!)
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Reviewed By: James the Lesser [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 17:12 CST
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I sent a email but for others out there... I love this show, right before MTV went downhill. No idea how long till next chapter is up. Anyways, with Jane... Two bases for this. One, promo for I think Season two involved a painting Jane did that Ms. Li, well, see the episode. Anyways, Daria makes a comment about "Adding flames to the rumours". Then in the first movie the scene with the female artist. WHy Andrea? Had to use someone that Daria and Jane didn't gate/ridicule and that left Andrea and Jodie. Jodie had Mack so she was out, leaving Andrea. Hmmm, Did Tom and Jane have sex? I thought he was a virgin with Daria, or what? Never said in the show. But you would think it would have made it in if Jane and Tom did it. And Daria, for now school, school, and school. Once she gets use to it she may/probably will look out for a friend since Jane is still in Lawndale. And maybe more...
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 17:13 CST
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No offense, but has anyone actually reviewed this story? I mean, you started this last year, and while Daria isn't super-popular (I'm a guy and I think I'm the only person I know who ever actually watched it) but it was good. And this story is an interesting continuation (the series itself wasn't exciting, but interesting, funny, and a bland way to relax, useful when you feel like the world is going nuts around you). So, hey I like it, though I like it best when the new xhpters are longer and more thorough. Still, note about how long you'd think it'd take to update and all of that, its good to know that sort of thing. Later man. Still, Jane was obvious with the change (I mean, saw it immediately with Andrea over, and maybe being interested in Daria was true at first, but they really just became good friends after a while, its a thought). Still, How will Daria's roomie act towards all of this (hey, valid thought, its a good question) Not to mention, what about Tom (probably should be cool with it, though joking around a little bit, what, sex wasn't fun[I knwo sounds crass to me too, but a more elegant version would be his style]). Anyway, what about Daria? What is she looking for at school? She should meet someone to talk to beyond her roommate, it would be cool to see her reaction to someone to be friendly towards (perhaps even...date? Hmmm). Anyway, love the story idea, hope you continue it. Later
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