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Title: where's ch.6???!!!
Reviewed By: shipougirl On: December 20, 2005 04:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i've been reading it from ch 1 for like two hours straight and i meet the bigest cliffy of all! you have to hurry and finish it...i'll die of anticipation! its great so far, but u cant let kagome die! inuyasha will fall into a depressed coma and live under a rock! and wut about kohaku?! i HAVE to know wut happens!!!!!
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Title: come om
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: December 14, 2005 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on i excited now so hurry
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Reviewed By: bk On: December 14, 2005 13:58 EST
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What a great story. I cant wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: me On: December 14, 2005 12:39 EST
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you have a great story, and after I finished the last chapter I had tears in my eyes! and this isn't very common for me! ;-) I just really hope that you can still make a happy end! it would be too unfair, if inuyasha never got his chance at love, and that kagome dies without knowing that he loves her too! do you plan on saving kagome? returning her from the deads? i hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_stalking_me [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EVIL. PLEASE WRITE MORE AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN PLEASE I DEMAND IT. THIS STORYY IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOL. I LOVE IT SOOOOOOO MUCH *crys* please write more
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Reviewed By: miko_kagome(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 20:15 EST
Comment/Review:
please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: you_got_2_b_kidding_me On: December 13, 2005 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stares at you* there is alot of death!!!!!! ra I love it . DONT YOU DARE KILL KAGOME! LOL .. you will die then? lol anyways update this is cool!
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Reviewed By: inuhaggrrl06 On: December 13, 2005 19:45 EST
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man you are great. I really want to know whats gonna happen next...
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Reviewed By: Margie On: December 12, 2005 13:45 EST
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Hi, if you save your story in .rtf and use Times New Roman 12 point font, you won't have any trouble with formatting when you upload the file. Put a blank line between each paragraph when you save your file on your computer too and it looks good on my computer monitor. I hope that helps. I wish you would stay on mediaminer because fanfiction.net sucks and I don't go there. I won't be able to continue reading your story. 'Sorry, but it's kinda chicken to let someone run you off from here. Did they flame you?
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 02:23 EST
Comment/Review:
great story so far! please update again so... can't wait! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Catalina27 On: November 27, 2005 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Shit that was awesome poor Kagome!...please finish soon I can't wait for Kagome to be rescued!!
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: November 26, 2005 16:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is definatly not good! What's happening, I mean. You write pretty good, and it's just as well that the fighting scenes aren't very long. Please update this, or is it already done?
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Reviewed By: wtf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 05:48 EST
Comment/Review:
I agree. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_stalking_me [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 00:30 EST
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Oh my heck. you need to write more!!!!! please im like dying here. this is sucha good story. please update as soon as possible please!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 04:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting! update soon..
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