| "Double or Nothing: Take the Money & Run" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 07:54 CDT
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Poor Wolfwood, always the dead partner, never the hero. Evil Inuyasha, suborning an innocent hedgehog like that! I really enjoy your writing but do you have a beta? A second pair of eyes can be really helpful. (I'm volunteering if you're interested)
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Title: nice!
Reviewed By: fudge On: February 13, 2006 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting can't wait 'till you update! hope you do it soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am so glad you updated. Was beginning to think you might've dropped this story. So glad you didnt. Great chapter BTW. I still love the way you have the characters. And gotta love Bartles. Do hedgehogs really eat pizza? Lol. I know my pet rat would eat fried chicken it you set the plate near her. She ate at the table sometimes with us. Great story, hope you can update soon.
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your characters. their personalities are so much like them... i want to know if something will happen between Kagome and Kouga... plez! plez! plez! finish it already! i want to know how it ends!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 02:35 CST
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lol this story is really funny and interesting. Can't wait for more. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is an interesting turn of events. Someones definately up to something and poor Kagome's stuck in the middle. Since someone shot at her, why didnt they shoot at Koga? Hmmm...And the plot thickens. OH YEA! Great story! I just love your style. The way you put the characters. Its just good all around. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: December 14, 2005 01:36 CST
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um dude u just left Kagome lying there...what happens next?!! aaah cliffie. o get well soon to your shoulder
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Reviewed By: Jesachi (not signed in) On: November 27, 2005 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Brillance once again! Need I say more? poor Kagome... battered and bruised by men... and yet... it's just awesome! I love the Plumish-ness... just intense! Anyway, gotta run! Cheers! Great story and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: blancasg@sbcglobal.net On: November 27, 2005 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, truly wonderful! I was waiting for someone to write something like this. Of course, got great influence from Janet. I can't wait until those special parts in the story...like whose gonna play Lula, Connie, Mooner, or Dickie Orr? LOL! I was thinking Kaede could be Lula and my mind just conjured it up and I got some serious funny shit. Or better yet, Kagura as Lula, cuz you figure she'd be the one with the weird fashion sense and Ayame or Sango as Connie. Just imagining them having connections with the mob/mafia is effin' hilarious! -Gasp- What about Grandma Mazur?? Hahahaha! God, you gotta have someone in there that portrays good ol' horny/wacky Grandma! Man...What about 'Cat Woman'? Or Tank?! LOL Geeze, I am crackin' up here! Do you think Kilala would be a good Bob? -Maniacal Laughter- Oh, man...I'm crying. Tears of laughter I assure you. Anyways...Great Job on the story and hope to hear from you soon via email or story..whichever. Later, Celestial Fox P.S. My nickname is my email address, if you wanna chat for whatever reason...Adios!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO...Gotta love the array of text messages, damn! But he will not kill him on the leather seats.OK. LOL. And hey, gotta love little Bartles.(Never had one myself, I have pet rats. Very intelligent)I was wondering when InuYasha was gonna make his grand entrance. I think I missed something along the way here. What the hell did he do to Kagome before? LMAO, and she ran him over? OOOOOHHH, cant wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is quite excellent! I'm excited for it! I do love the Plum series... hmmm... if I remember correctly, Ranger and Steph have their fun, and so do Morelli and Steph... does this mean Kags is going to go between them? OOHH!!! And you SO should continue, like the series does! That would be so awesome! One nit pick thing I noticed, however, (if you don't mind me saying) that "yokai" is spelled "youkai"... just something small! Other than that, cool! Update soon! ~Jesachi
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: November 22, 2005 14:28 CST
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oo what's gonna happen next? will Kagome end up with Inuyasha who seems jerky thus far, or Kouga her fellow bounty dude? haha plz update sooon
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, thats it, just take his ride. Lets see what happens next.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, now this is getting pretty interesting. Licks it and slaps it to Fluffys forehead, LMAO. Yet was able to leave on her own. Interesting indeed. Ok, am awaiting an update.
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Reviewed By: Diesel_Typhoon(nsi) On: November 11, 2005 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao, too cool, I love it, Inu Yasha soo fits as Morelli! Awesomeness, keep it up!
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