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Title: Oops ;P
Reviewed By: Andraia143 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2020 09:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
sure you're aware, and if you're not, I wish uo voice a concern:
chapter 19 is somehow a Naruto story! I was very confused until I
realized this was not an inuyasha Fanfic. I hope you fix this! Even
if I skipped this and read chapter 20 (which I tried) there are key
details missing (so I stopped reading, so not to ruin the ending) .
Thanks for your time! -Andraia143
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Title: Oh no!
Reviewed By: Andraia143 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2020 09:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sure you're aware, and of your not, I wish up choice a concern:
chapter 19 is somehow a Naruto story! I was very confused until I
realized this was not an inuyasha Fanfic. I hope you fix this! Even
if I skipped this and read chapter 20 (which I tried) there are key
details missing, so I stopped reading. Thanks for your time!
-Andraia143
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Title: Small problem...
Reviewed By: Osuwari! On: October 09, 2018 22:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm very confused... Chapter 19 isn't showing up right... as in its
been replaced by a Naruto story called 'sunsets'. It seems like
some very important things happened in the missing chapter.
Otherwise, this story is awesome! I really can't wait to read the
rest. I'll definitely recommend it to friends!
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Title: Small problem...
Reviewed By: Osuwari! On: October 09, 2018 22:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm very confused... Chapter 19 isn't showing up right... as in its
been replaced by a Naruto story called 'sunsets'. It seems like
some very important things happened in the missing chapter.
Otherwise, this story is awesome! I really can't wait to read the
rest. I'll definitely recommend it to friends!
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Title: Small problem...
Reviewed By: Osuwari! On: October 09, 2018 22:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm very confused... Chapter 19 isn't showing up right... as in its
been replaced by a Naruto story called 'sunsets'. It seems like
some very important things happened in the missing chapter.
Otherwise, this story is awesome! I really can't wait to read the
rest. I'll definitely recommend it to friends!
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Title: Small problem...
Reviewed By: Osuwari! On: October 09, 2018 22:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm very confused... Chapter 19 isn't showing up right... as in its
been replaced by a Naruto story called 'sunsets'. It seems like
some very important things happened in the missing chapter.
Otherwise, this story is awesome! I really can't wait to read the
rest. I'll definitely recommend it to friends!
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Title: Much love
Reviewed By: Nekuyasha (not logged in) On: January 29, 2017 18:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this beautiful ficcy less than a week ago and fell
instantly in love with it! It was a good thing I had the day off,
because I read all 20 chapters in one sitting. Side note: chapter
19 was from a different story that day (something Naruto). I'll
have to check that out now. Anyway, I was super thrilled to find
chapter 21 tonight! It's a great ending to this story. Although, if
you ever decide to add to it, you could always do little one shots
of their life together; her getting pregnant and letting him know,
their child's birth, etc. Could you imagine how the guys would take
to being a little girl's uncles? Or how Sesshomaru would handle the
first time his daughter went on a date? Sorry, plot bunnies started
jumping to life as I read your A/N at the end of the chapter.
Anyway, I adore this fic and wanted to make sure you knew it. And
considering I like Kag/Inu fics as a general rule, that's saying
something. Kudos! The Neku ^.~
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Reviewed By: toots On: October 25, 2010 09:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
ummm.... there was just one thing i wanted to comment on... as far as the fact of sesshoumaru being the strongest demon around in japan i would have to say in the series that is not true. though inuyasha has many faults and may get hurt a lot he has actually bested sesshoumaru not once but twice when they fought. the first time was when he cut off sesshoumaru's arm the second was when sesshoumaru acquired toukigin (?) i think that's how you spell it lol. it's the main sword he uses now. but when he acquired it he went to battle inuyasha and inuyasha totally kicked his ass. that is when he retreated and rin found him outside her village and tried to nurse him to health. i believe it was a few episodes before kagome got kidnapped by kouga. i just wanted to shed some light on that. there are some people who write about sesshoumaru being all powerful... and he is but he is not by any means the strongest demon. but you have really good writing style. i am a little confused with the whole present day sesshoumaru and old sesshoumaru but it's getting a little less confusing as i read. keep up the good work. ^_^~buh byes
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 20:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! You do an amazing job of portraying everyone. It is so hard to keep Sesshoumaru in character but you do a great job of it. I hope that you keep writing because you are a great writer.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 09:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
this was a very good story. i stayed up all night reading it and since its almost 9:30am this will be a short review. i really like the fact that you didnt make inuyasha abusive, for some reason it seems like 75% of sess/kagome fics have inuyasha being physically abusive towards kagome. i really like the fact that you didnt do this.
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Reviewed By: Lina03 On: May 29, 2008 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for this story, it was a very enjoyable read! Great work and I am very happy that to have found this story, thanks for your hard work and good luck! ^_^
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Reviewed By: delicious.mistress On: May 30, 2007 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
100% absolutely the best fan fic I have EVER read. It is simply amazing, delicious, sultry, powerful and heart-stopping. I don't think there are enough words to describe it. I'm just so.. blown away. Consider me your number one fan, darling. Keep it up, and I'm off to read some more of your fics. Chamred, Del Mistress
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 17:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aw the end! *Pout* But please write an FMA fic! I just got into that...well lets just say I am a complete addict! And you are such a good writer! So and FMA fic by you would make me very happy indeed! *Croons* I'll look out for it, if you don't write it, you don't write it...as you said...sniffle.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 13:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! I just can't seem to get enough of it! why, oh why did it have to end? but it did end on a good note, leaving people still wondering but still having understanding on what happens in the future of the characters... very good ending in deed... i have to go now though, if you wanna contact me try inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: EarthToMe001 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 14:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
I should never be away from my email again! a week goes by and 2 stories are finished! well, all good things must come to an end I guess. I really enjoyed reading this story and if you ever decide to write something else, i'm sure it will be just as good. thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us! ^_^
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