| "Surrey Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: April 17, 2006 07:05 CDT
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Well after consumeing chapter 31 like an emanciated lion, I realize something. You are a really good author. Now I know this may seem obvious, as everyone says they love you/story (and how could they not) and I believe I've said that as well at some point. No I mean you are really very talented, and not just with this story, but with your style of writing, devolpment of plot and devolpment of charecters. You add OC's and charecters from different stories so seamlessly I feel like I have to watch the show again to make sure there're no wizards, or to see if Harry Potter makes mention of giant robots (ogre yes, robots no. Darn it.) This story is delicious, and you are quite the skilled wordsmith. I applaud you. Now. Fix chapter 30 and update!
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Reviewed By: drkwndz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 02:03 CDT
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just FYI chapter 30cuts off in the middle of your author note at the top. but 29 was wonderful as always.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 15:50 CST
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chapter 30 is f'ed up, you know. it just cuts off
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 28, 2006 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update. Now. Please? Well, at least we know Harry's in there...somewhere... GET THE COLLAR OFF FEI! THE COLLAR! (he can't hear me can he?) Oh well. This made my day...better get back to work ^-^; Thanks for a good read.
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Title: great story!
Reviewed By: Aria-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. Its very original though there are some part that I dont really like... HARRY IS KIDNAPPED BY VOLDESMORTS AND DOESNT REMEMBER FEI!!! *Cries* *Coughs* Anyways... great story! I would love to see what happens next and how the crew brings Harry back to them :) Thank you very much and please update soon :) xxxx Aria-Chan
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: March 25, 2006 23:00 CST
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 13:22 CST
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Yeay! You brought in the Twins! I love those two..they is soo cool...*hugs and cuddles for you*
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon Kirallie, your stories are some of the best I've come across. Personally, I'm hoping you might add something about the twins...distraction methods ^_^ Gotta love the twins. This is a great story so please update soon, I'm going nutty, well..nuttier, waiting for your updates!
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Title: AHHHpurrrAHHHpurr
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 16, 2006 20:44 CST
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I'm firmly caught between the urge to scream or purr. Right another chapter so i can stop having bipolar...PurrAHHHHHHH!puuurAHHHHHpuAH! Stop it! AHHpurr. Gonk. Yeah, um, update? Please?
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Reviewed By: pixiesmithnsi On: March 05, 2006 13:00 CST
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I just discovered this story and I must say I'm loving it at the moment. The whole terroists in the Harry Potter world - oh wait, it's actually Harry Potter in the GW World - is so exciting! I love Wufei so it's fun to see him paired with Harry. Looks like with all the power Harry has now, he's unbeatable. Yay!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: March 04, 2006 18:10 CST
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Does Harry meet Nevile, Luna, and Draco on the colony? get Fei and Heero out safely? do they show up the wizarding world? soon? update more soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: February 08, 2006 22:48 CST
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HE SPEAKS!!! lol. its great that he is getting better! do the others get used to Fawks? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 13:52 CST
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AWWW.... That's so sweet, and it's awesome that Fawkes is on his side... BAD DUMBLEDORE, BAD!
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Title: Surrey Trouble
Reviewed By: Dominic Maxwell On: January 27, 2006 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to when Harry beats the shit out of Dark Lord.... Keep the good work and I want to find out what happen's next so keep writting......... Later, Dominic Kerry Sirius Potter-Maxwell-Chang
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: January 27, 2006 03:28 CST
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Malfoy as a good guy?? who woulda thunk it?? me liking..keep writing please!
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