| "Surrey Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 08:05 CST
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totaly cool!!!!!! very interesting!!! how does Harry know when Remus dies? does he do anything? what happens when he enter the wizarding world again? does he? update more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a good writer, the reason I geve you the rating I did is because I believe there is room for improvement on grammar and style, I did however, really enjoy the story and hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster(Kix not logged in) On: December 10, 2005 13:11 CST
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I'm realy enjoying this story, i like the idea of dumbledore being 'BAD' *mwahahhahhahh* I'm looking forward to your next chapter
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 14:05 CST
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You did a good Dobby. Don't swea it... and get unstuck!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 11:03 CST
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Pretty good Dobby, m'girl... get unstuck, okay?
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Title: again!!
Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 03:36 CST
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Reviewed By: again On: December 05, 2005 22:37 CST
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gggf
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Title: TRAINERS!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 19:52 CST
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OOO! I know a person to be a trainer! I can help! My name is Libby! I can be older, and stuff... r I can be a witch... in the Maguanacs... like a sister to one of them or something. Eh? It's just a suggestion... that and the name Tirolle... I don't kno where it came from, but you can use it... okay? update soon!
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Reviewed By: drkwndz On: December 02, 2005 00:38 CST
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yep, still love it. Harry Potter the politician? that poor boy. anywho more please.
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Reviewed By: and again On: November 29, 2005 03:39 CST
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jsns
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: November 29, 2005 02:48 CST
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*cuddles her Dobby Plushie* hewo!! me still reading! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: November 28, 2005 20:28 CST
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I'm definatly enjoying this fic..i do enjoy HP?GW crossovers!
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Reviewed By: Caitilin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 17:51 CST
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As to why you are not seeing reviews: I have the same problem with my fic. If you are using internet explorer, go to tools, (internet)options, then press on the delete cookies button, followed by the delete offline content button next to it (you'll have to check a box to do this properly). Then press shift and the reload button on your browser. You may have to do that a few times, or even access mediaminer again, but it does work. The rest of your fic is doing great, though you've got one or two typo's/synonym/homonym issues, but that's just minor stuff. Your dumbledore is a great conniving bad guy.
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Reviewed By: me again On: November 28, 2005 04:51 CST
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really hate this!!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 16:11 CST
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GO NEVILLE AND LUNA!!!! I hate Dumbledore now, you know... you've ruined him for me. I love you! Write more!!!
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