| "Surrey Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Esca On: July 02, 2006 17:55 CDT
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Oh, idea! You could try putting chapters 30 and 31 together and uploading them as one chapter instead. It might work that way!
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Reviewed By: Firefly_of_death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 02:05 CDT
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I have read this all the way through so far and I like it a lot. It is one of my faves. Keep up the good work. Bye
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Looged In) On: June 16, 2006 11:40 CDT
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I am sorry to say, but this chapter really did sound rushed. I am not meaning anything by this, but you could tell. I am getting the vibe that either everything is mellowing out for good, or that you are just allowing the characters some time of rest before you either kill them off or throw them into a big battle. I am figuring that you're just waiting for the final battle. Voldemort has yet to be killed after all. I am saddened that Dumbledore turned out to be a manipulative bastard in your story. We knew from the beggining that he was going to be, but I didn't think you would make him go that far. Oh well, goes to show how much I know. There isn't really anything else I could say at this point. Ot feels to me that this story is comming to a close, it is a good story, there were alot of good things that came out of it. -Grins- I have to tell you though, I loved it and I am glad I read it. Thanks. Ja!
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Title: Hey look... kidnapping!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 30, 2006 06:57 CDT
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Someday Harry will get a day off without being attacked by crazy old men and potions. Really... okay so there was that trip the sweepers and Howard got a bit confused...and the zombie Dr. J... and I suppose you couldd count that one time with the creepy old man at the store. But really, someday the COM will leave him alone... Until he and Wuffers grow old. Then he's pretty much screwed (so many double meanings!) Great chapter. Ta!
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Reviewed By: Ang_Avalonis On: May 25, 2006 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of the best that I read alot in mediaminer. I haven't been able to review and all but now I'm able to start it up and all. I always love it the HP is crossover with GW and Naruto and anyother anime. Your story has great detail in it and perfect plot to it and all. Between HP/GW crossovers, I always love how Wufei and Harry are paired together and all. And I love the new look for Harry too. And know with the final chapter, I'm happy that Harry and Wufei finally take the next step into their relationship and all. I also think that Draco and Blaise should be paired together because of how Draco cares for Blaise so deeply, well maybe not so deeply but close enough. And I know how it is funny that Harry and Heero somewhat look alike and they both their names start with 'H' and all. I can't wait to see how Dumbledore gets to lose more and more control and not control Harry and all. I loved it how Snape was like "Sucks to be you" to both Dumble and Volty since both are pissed off that niether of them can control Harry and all. I can't wait what you have for the next chapter and all. Please update soon and all. Ang Avalonis : ) smiley
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Reviewed By: Meefmonster On: May 17, 2006 04:27 CDT
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Saving the actual Smut for the next chapter???
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Title: ::angelic sound::
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 11, 2006 07:05 CDT
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Another update? I don't know the words to express how happy I am, but "WHHEEEEE!" comes awful close. Yeah, that was inspiring... In any case great chapter, Yay HarryxWufei cuteness and awwww Blaise and Harry don't want to kill each other. That's cute. Ha. Fried turkey... ^-^ Update again? Now? Please?
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 09, 2006 19:33 CDT
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Can someone explain why I have three reviews in a row for this fic? Please? It's awesoem and fluffy and ::purr:: I should not get more than one review a page. 0.o This was good, and the amount of updates is nice. I'm now spoiled and you now half to deal with a spoiled Pyro, which smells better than spoiled milk. Whee. Have I mentioned I adore this fic? Yes? Good. I reiterate and send you a sound file that repeats it endlessly until it's carved into your brain. (I think that's more of a punishment than anything else, ne?) But this is one of the better Yoai Harry fics. For one there isn't a Severus ship, which is just creepy... really... REALLY... creepy... I shut up now. UPDATE! (I scare myself)
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Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: May 05, 2006 18:15 CDT
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Today's my lucky day, 4 of my favorite authors updated stuff. Sveet. This is good, this is very good. We might actually get some Wufei and Harry cuteness going on. Or Draco/Blaise! I think I may just be a ship crazy person though 0.o which is odd because I tend not to write people together. Oh well. Update soon. Please?
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 12:03 CDT
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I saw the word Surrey and jumped it, this was good, and I think Blaise and Draco need to be a couple. It's cute. Besides, could you honestly pass up on a Draco snuggleing scene? Really. Think about it. DEMAND UPDATE. I'm pushy, but it's out of obbsession-I said love...er... now I'm just being creepy. ::bolts::
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: April 30, 2006 11:08 CDT
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I aint leaving you never! Sail on Capitain!
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Title: Ch 29 Ch 31
Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has something happened to Chapter 30? You go from 29 to 31 (which is good by the way but I would really enjoy reading 30 because I think I'm missing something). Just thought I would bring that to your attention.
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: April 17, 2006 07:05 CDT
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Well after consumeing chapter 31 like an emanciated lion, I realize something. You are a really good author. Now I know this may seem obvious, as everyone says they love you/story (and how could they not) and I believe I've said that as well at some point. No I mean you are really very talented, and not just with this story, but with your style of writing, devolpment of plot and devolpment of charecters. You add OC's and charecters from different stories so seamlessly I feel like I have to watch the show again to make sure there're no wizards, or to see if Harry Potter makes mention of giant robots (ogre yes, robots no. Darn it.) This story is delicious, and you are quite the skilled wordsmith. I applaud you. Now. Fix chapter 30 and update!
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Reviewed By: drkwndz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 02:03 CDT
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just FYI chapter 30cuts off in the middle of your author note at the top. but 29 was wonderful as always.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 15:50 CST
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chapter 30 is f'ed up, you know. it just cuts off
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