| "The Emperor's New Angst" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: Now THAT'S funny.
Reviewed By: Syn Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason I gave a eight fo rthe spelling/grammar was during the IM converation and a couple of other times I noticed what looked to be a capital A and some other characters...(possibly a problem during upload,) Other than that little glitch...this was laugh-out-loud funny. I like how you've made Rei a bit more...aggressive, please don't change much, and update soon. Excellent work, Syn Alexander
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Reviewed By: rootathell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 05:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, you hit Rei's approach on an 'ordered' relationship that she also wants head on. plz hurry with the next chapter
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Title: Good laughs
Reviewed By: FinalMax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is some damned fun stuff. Almost reminds me of the House of Ikari, except not involving geishas (yet) and not boring. Can't wait to see how Asuka ends up living with the Emperor. I can see it now: Shinji and Misato go pick up Pen-Pen and discover that Asuka's been living off of beer. Misato gets upset that her beer was consumed by someone other than Pen-Pen and herself, and Shinji will want to keep Asuka from being malnourished. Of course with Asuka being drunk, she'll naturally have the whole "beer goggles" thing in effect. With the ratings, I couldn't see any spelling or grammar errors that I know of, but that doesn't mean that errors couldn't exist. I'm just erring on the side of caution.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story and writing. I loved the playful Rei and hope you continue this story soon.
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good to hear from you again Lord Raa and the story is very good so far. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: Entertaining as always
Reviewed By: Caphriel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another amusing and entertaining story. I hope this one doesn't overlap with Don't Stop Me Now, but I can see them tending to head in the same direction. Keep up the good work, your stories keep my blood pressure down.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice update Raa, looking forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: garvin2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work as always Raa. I'd like to see Shinji's guards get intoa fight with Asuka when she tries to smakc the shit out of him.
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Title: great start
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never read tis premise before but it looks like it will be a very promising story. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An interesting Premise and it seemed you forgot Asuka after Shinji moved to the Palace. I wonder how Rei will be used by Gendo and will she remain loyal to him? Rits going gaga over Shinji, well its been done so ok. So whats next? dennisud
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Reviewed By: dagon90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job. I have to say, honestly, the plagerized (and I criticized your grammar, lol.) title wasn't really expected, but I liked your story a lot. Just make sure you don't abandon this story, or the death threats will start rolling in. Trust me. Not really much I can say to help the story, its good as it is, so just keep writing like I said. DEATH THREATS!!!
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