| "This Modern Love" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
Reviewed By: duhlia On: April 07, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plase please please update soon
|
Reviewed By: bancomat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
we miss this fic!
|
Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: InsaneKit On: February 25, 2006 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely and sincerely love your fic! plz update soon! its really original, and unlike a lot of others, it doesnt put me to sleep!update!
|
Reviewed By: Patty** On: February 25, 2006 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I'd like to say that your story is really good one of the bests i've read pleasee update soon because i'm dieing to know what is gonna happen!!! and i'd like to know if botan will be able to see inuyasha's soul while he is around kagome , i mean she is the grim reaper she should be able to talk to him right? thanks and please update, Patty
|
Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap because you haven't done it in a long time!
|
Reviewed By: Santaru On: January 24, 2006 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!!! ^.^ PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Suntaru On: January 24, 2006 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, i love this story, its awesome, you really are a good writer
|
Reviewed By: Kawaii Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the general idea of this story. Unfortunately, I think, the thoughts of the demon Kagome has in her head takes away from this chapter. Nothing the voice says makes sense. It's just rambling. Like… disconnected thoughts. Well, exactly like disconnected thought since we don't know (even if we can assume) what's provoking them. Other than that? The spelling and grammar in this chapter is pretty good (though you could fix some of that too), but you do add on unneeded infronation. And you repeat yourself. A lot. (i.e.: "Every arrow hit its target straight on, and no arrows had gone astray." (you then repeat the idea that Kagome doesn't need to aim two paragraphs down) and "A clear path was straight in front of her, Naraku at the end. He hadn't noticed yet; Kagome had a clear path to shoot."). I've seen it in your other stories too. 'Every arrow hit its target.' and '… The opening Kagome had been waiting for had been given to her. Inuyasha had just used the wind scar to create a path to Naraku in front of her.' - or something to that effect - is FINE. There is nothing wrong with being short and concise. Actually, clarifying the idea multiple times makes it seem like you're dumbing the story down for us. But one question. If Kagome shot the arrow at Naraku and it had to 'soar past' everyone to get to him, how did she just reach out and take his shards away? Well, my point is, this story is good. It has potential. You just need to get a beta or proof read it yourself. ...I just hope the next chapter is better... ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
|
Reviewed By: bancomat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 05:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
simply love it and i'm a succer for kags-kurama pairings. keep up the good work!
|
Reviewed By: bancomat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 05:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
simply love it and i'm a succer for kags-kurama pairings. keep up the good work!
|
Reviewed By: Hoku-chan On: January 11, 2006 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAH! Ohhhh my goodness, this chapter got me laughing...please update soon!
|
Title: Whoooo.......
Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: January 11, 2006 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE DAMN U! PLZZZZZ.............For god sake...plz continue or i'll cry a 1000 tears. :crys: plz continue for shippou sake....
|
Title: haha please update
Reviewed By: going-SuperNova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon that is funny poor kagome though she is in a towel and there are guys around her will her power act up and send the people flying hehe and she NEEDS to get some clothes on hahaha that is pretty funny though i think that she should have a spell or somehting and is sesshomaru going to be in the next chapter? that would be very funny and i would die laughing if he is and i think that if he is she should yell a yusuke and sesshomaru and i think that kagome should see inuyasha and the shikon should dome thing or somehting happens cauz i love this story i really think that you should update soon please
|
Reviewed By: bancomat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 05:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it and it's fun. a kags/kurama pairing is perfect. if it's not too late, i say kags should be a demon.
|
Title: reeeeaaally awwwesome fic!
Reviewed By: Mikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic.in most of the other Kurama/Kagome, Hiei/Kagome, Yusuke/Kagome fanfics kagome was the one who sensed their powers, instead of one of the guys sensing her powers... or whatever. And I like that kagome had her hair highlighted. one of the best fics ever! please continue the fic
|
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
