| "One Shot At Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Kiranta On: November 08, 2006 10:19 CST
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v_v see so many alternate pairings, but not one Inu/San. A collection isn't complete without at least ONE of that pairing. Even thought you might hate that idea, what I say does have a ring of truth to it. You can't enjoy one alternate pairing and hate another cause it 'doesn't make sense'. If you don't think Inu/San has any grounds, check out Kakera no Ai(Shards of Love), they have a 'Hints' section that proves many that they don't have any affection to each other wrong big time.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: July 05, 2006 01:32 CDT
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chapter one was interesting... i hate the pairing, but whatever. i like the peeing on a tree line.
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Title: red sky
Reviewed By: anonymouss On: March 24, 2006 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u gotta make sesshie the cop next ^_~ or at least have control
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Title: Freakin' Sweet!
Reviewed By: Kohara On: March 18, 2006 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U have to update soon! I luv these 1-shots!
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Title: One Shot At Fun
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Silent_J [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:09 CST
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Brilliant. Nuff said.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: January 11, 2006 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG, it almost made me be near tears. It wa so sweet.
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Title: One Shot At Fun
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome or Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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Title: Oh teh!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 08:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeh , i read this one forgot to review though. I liked it you put just enough dominance in it for my likeing. I tried to tell my fiancee about it and he only got frustrated cuz hes in texas and im at home lol but keep writing more, and continue to review me!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 19:05 CST
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That was another great one shot, you have a talent for hentai fics.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was really cool. Great job, can't wait to see more!!!!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
nice...i like it...
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I must agree with the others, it was really hott!!! I think you should make some Souta and Shippo one shots since there aren't many around.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 23:56 CST
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^__^;; wow. that was...err...hot? very very hot. lol. talk about, hello, want to fuck? LMAO. very well done though. i think though, the phrasing would be better, if Inu maybe changed 'i'll see you later' to 'i'll catch you later'. man, that was some hot stuff though! great update, keep it going!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. somebody open a window!!! amazing, simply amazing, and oh so hot!!! very well done. the three-some has to be one of the hottest things yet. i've read a couple of those, since people won't dabble in those areas to often, and they aren't half good, this was so well done though. i would have loved to read of either more adventures or just what the four of them were doing that night. Very well done!!! and the sesshiles being dead...that was sad. poor Kagura. i'm downloading the song though, i want to hear it. great work, and keep it up!!!
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